What would make a good and interesting fight scene? · 4:08pm Sep 27th, 2014
So as the story, Past Shadows it getting to the climax, I'm getting near a big (and I mean big) fight scene. I want to know what all of you think will make an very interesting fight scene (With ponies that is) I've done plenty of fight scenes but that was with humans. Doing a fight scene with ponies is, kind of hard. didn't know if anyone out there would mid helping to see if a fight scene I post in this blog would is good and keeps the reader entertained.
So here's just one of the fight scenes:
“Oh, your anguish, your pain is so delectable,” the figure laughed. Tears stained the sand as small amounts of blood dripped from Weaponry’s hooves. he mumbled something as he turned to the figure.
“What was that?” the figure said.
“Bastard,” Weaponry mumbled.
“I’m sorry, I can't hear you,” the figure mocked as it laughed.
“You bastard!” Weaponry screamed as he slammed his front hooves to the ground. Thirty orbs appeared around Weaponry before the all took the form of various weapons. His eyes, which were filled with sadness a moment ago where now filled with hate and anger.
Weaponry suddenly blasted towards the figure, sand exploding into the air. Two of the orbs that had taken the shape of gauntlets flew onto his hooves as he uppercutted the figure into the air. Weaponry bent his legs and flew into the air as sand jetted into the air after him. The gauntlets disappeared from his hooves and two swords flew next to him as the repeatedly slashed at the figure. Pieces of the figures cloak flew into the air before Weaponry used the figures body to fly higher above the figure before all the weapons combined into one massive hammer the size of a fill grown dragon. The hammer swung down and slammed into the figure, sending it into the sand with a massive fountain of sand blasting into the air. The hammer scattered thirty spears and flew towards where the figure had landed and pierced into the figures body. Weaponry landed on the sand breathing heavily as he looked into the large sand cloud.
“Come on! I know your still in there, come out so I can kick your flank back to Tartarus,” Weaponry yelled. He wanted to figure to stumble out so he could continue to beat it down until it begged for mercy. I won’t stop, not even if you cry out to Celestia to make it stop. I’ll kill you, make you pay for everything! Weaponry thought.
