I am a student of economics,history and biology. I've come here to produce my seminal work Draconomachi. I hope to complete a and have it edited and posted somewhere it'll get noticed.
woo...
Pardon my panic.
I really want to give you guys something to read...
I really am horrible at this.
I just get so caught up in community stufff.
I really am sorry.
here I go.
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Ouch. Is that a one-space indenture I'm seeing?
Get to work, soldier!
174383 He's really bad with indents, especially during dialogue. He should consider not doing them at all. Make my job a little easier, lol.
174418
don't mind me....I'm standing over here....with my hurt feelings.
you act like I never told you that I do it on purpose.
174418
Trust me, I've mentioned it more than a few times xD
Honestly, I'm happy I got him to take out the needless spaces between paragraphs as well as a few other things.
Still got some work to do on the whole "let's put random spaces right in the middle of our paragraphs", but that's less of an issue, I suppose.
Hey Magnum, hope you don't mind us just shamelessly bashing your stuff like that
174457
*sniffle*
174461
Stop forgeting the spaces after punctuation so often and I'll be more lenient with you, you lovable little schmuck!
(Just in case: I'm joking. About the schmuck, not the spaces and punctuation thing xD)
174449 You never did. I was content just thinking it was a glitch in formatting transfer, but now, with that screencap, I realize that all of the paragraphs that you forgot to do them on, I changed for a reason. I tried to make everything uniform, which is why I took the formatting that held the majority and converted the rest.
Also: "...habitable space out they they're only hope..." ??????? I think you meant "...habitable space out. Their only hope..." or "...habitable space out that their only hope..." but even that makes an awkward sentence. Watch out for that.
You're welcome.
174457 Oh did you? I was content just fixing the bits where there were double spaces between paragraphs, or no spaces at all.
YAY!..... I think.
174474
Come now, let him at least finish redacting the damn chapter already. If we keep pointing out stuff that's awkward he'll never be done.
And you'd be surprised at how many of those spacing mistakes between paragraphs subsisted in his prologue and prologue². Still got to run over the entirety of his chapter one but I'm putting it off all the time in favor of my own writing and geeking it up. Goddess knows that's going to be a tough costumer :p
PS: I'll get around to it, Magnum! I swear!
174485 Don't bother. I done did it earlier. Also further touched up the prologues after you set the brass tacks. On each prologue, I put in the gold filigree, and did the whole shebang on chapter one.
But yeah, I think I'll let you take first crack at chapter two.
174509>>174485
i.imgur.com/uFKoQ.jpg
174509
Will still take a look at that first chapter, although if we're talking "gold filigree" here, I probably won't have much to point out.
I can live with having the first go at chapter two as well
174516 Well, he hasn't applied my update, yet. I'll remind him when he posts the second chapter. He seems a little busy.