Chapter 4 is going to be changed: Need feedback and ideas · 9:56am Sep 20th, 2014
Just a note to all readers of Legend of Spyro: Equestria's Legacy, after reading through Chapter 4 I realized I had not put much thought into it, instead trying to get it out as quickly as possible for you to read and review. I am going to change a few things in this Chapter before moving on to the next one, revising the Changelings invasion plans, make the Villain less powerful but more cunning ect. But this is where I'm going to need your help. I would like some constructive feedback on how the story is progressing so far and some ideas that I could use during the story. So the revised scenario I'm trying to set up is;
A Changeling Hive launches a stealth attack on Dracovale, but this is not Chrysalis' hive, but another run by a King. The plan is at its core a brilliant one, take out the guards by stealth, get close to these targets (Lord Cassius, the Draig, the Tribunal and Spyro) under the guise of those same guards and capture them simultaneously. But the key here is Spyro, his untapped power is what the Changeling King is after, for reasons I will not disclose at this time. The Changeling King needs Spyro to enter (for want of a better word) his 'Avatar State' so he can drain Spyro of his new found powers. Plus you have Shade, a man hired by the Draig Riekers competing with this hive with a rogue Changeling by his side to capture Spyro, the Mane 5 are not at this celebration, dealing with a threat in the Everfree Forest, so its just Spyro, the Tribunal, (Twilight, Luna and Celestia. Cadence is back home in the Crystal Empire) who before the ambush discuss Spyro's 'gifts' as well as Spyro warning them of the coming danger. Then during the ambush we see the Changelings have evolved, no longer just Equines, but now humanoid and most terrifying of all, Draig Changelings, which is the reason why the Draig are not at this celebration, Changelings have overpowered them and are now holding them captive.
How do you see this scenario playing out, and is there anything you would like to suggest to improve this? I look forward to your replies.
