Chapter 15 of My Little Hedgehog has been updated. · 7:36pm Jun 13th, 2012
After releasing Chapter 15, I was slightly disheartened by the fact it didn't get nearly as much attention as Chapter 14 (DAMN YOU FEATURE SYSTEM GETTING MY HOPES UP) but none the less, I was happy with the positive feedback. Then I read over the section that everyone seemed to like, the 'ShadowShy' section (Thanks to kaijinzero for the nickname, it's a good'un)
And I realised something.
I didn't like it.
When I thought up the section, I imagined something like it, but it needed soul. It needed feelings. Something which I haven't really done, and I think it's essential. So I went over the section and added some little bits and bobs to make it sound better (In my mind at least) So it's been updated. Not much in it, but like I said, it adds a little more to what is going through Fluttershy's head.
Have a look if you want, I won't force you.....*aims gun*
Ok ok don't shoot mee
i think that is the kindest way anyone has asked me to read something.
I'll read it if you go through all the chapters and fix the Ponyvillie thing. Ponyville
173598
I did that a few days go. You're rather picky, aren't you?
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Only for things that happen in excess of 30 times.
173798
Seems fair