New Story Up: "Hurt"

Here's a link: Hurt

This one's been sitting in a relatively finished state in my writing folder since early this summer. I decided to quit working on it and go ahead and publish it as it is. I had originally planned on making much longer, and with more of a plot, but I lost my passion for this story. Better a shorter story than no story at all, I suppose. This one is a bit more personal and experimental as compared to my other works. I was trying to focus on description, which is something I need to focus on morein my own writing, so let me know what you think of the story, I'd love to get some feedback on it.

This story, as the title implies, was greatly influenced by this song.

Y'all keep on rocking.