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ComatoseVEVO


Just some guy trying to make it in life and write pony words as a passtime, I am currently 25 years old

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  • 7 weeks
    New Project Announcement

    Hey all, how have you been, FIMFic's most consistently late author here.

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  • 52 weeks
    Chapter 2 sneak peek

    Moving through the destroyed city center was rather tricky, the mix of collapsed buildings and totaled cars made for plentiful obstacles and even more ambush positions, which is why I chose to move building to building, between alleyways and backdoors, this made for slower progress but the extra cover was nice and it gave more scavenging opportunities.

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  • 77 weeks
    Update

    SOOOOOO, I currently have a lot of free time, I'll try to get the second chapter done by the end of the week
    Let's hope the creative juices get flowing

    that's all

    -ComatoseVEVO

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  • 78 weeks
    Universe, Dark and why?

    Universe

    So vast and unexplored
    Bright and beautiful
    A limitless expanse
    So full and empty
    Forever expanding
    Never stopping
    That's my love to you

    Dark

    Deep limitless dark
    Clouds my sight
    Slayed only by a rich violet
    Piercing through the dark
    Surely as an arrow in flight
    I wonder, though, where are you headed?
    Is it me you visit so unknowingly?

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  • 78 weeks
    Another Morning

    Yet another morning I wake alone
    Missing your essence beside me
    Knowing it has to be this way, alone
    Even then I dream of you, alone
    Like a leech this has stuck to my heart
    Draining all the life away
    My memory still plagued by those moments
    Digging into my skin without reprieve

    -ComatoseVEVO

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Aug
29th
2014

Ahh fuck it ill be triying anyways · 1:26am Aug 29th, 2014

The waits killing me, even though im the writer its like i cant ressist the urge to just push that button and risk rejection but chapters not done yet, I could leave it there, but, what do you guys think, should i post it anyways or wait till september 31st and have something like 3 chapters done?
Please answer I really need your help right now, not just XEN0's. Please.

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Comments ( 4 )

Like for wait, dislike for Risk of Rejection.

2410320 well, it all depends on whether you write fast or slow, you dont want people waiting 6 months per chapter, but if you do wait and post 3 insta-chapters its gonna give people a false sense of haste. i'd say that if you write slow, then wait until you have, like, as you said, 3 chapters, and post 1 a month. or if the story gets really hyped (and hopefully it will with the grammar quality on this bad-boy!), give the readers a metaphorical cookie and post a chapter early! but if your a fast writer then you could post it now and get away with maybe 2 a month (if you write like sonic the hedgehog). its not too hard to edit your stuff, so i dont see too much of a problem. :scootangel:

2413012 good idea my friend Buena idea

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