GET OUT OF MY HEAD!

You have always been there,
As the dark, mysterious, yet interesting being.
With your copper smokestacks, long iron hallways, and steel stairwells,
There is no reason why you still are a memory worth lingering.

And yet somehow, despite the places I go,
You call me back,
And now I want to know...

What made those walls so famous?
What really caused your demise?
What secrets are you willing to hide?

Since you disappeared from time...

Rainbow Factory... You're on my mind.

Coming in the distant future...

Comments

[VampireFluttershyTails]

Wow, this is a pretty good poem.
I saw one mistake.

You call be back

I'm pretty sure that's supposed to be "me".
I like the song Rainbow Factory and almost all its remixes.
I have half the remixes in my playlist.

[Nugget]

2387035 Fixed.....

help me..... that place haunts me...

[VampireFluttershyTails]

2387040 Thank you.
Now, it's perfect!
Also, I sent a reply to you.

Oh, no! Um... uh...
Here!