Even more changes... · 10:52pm Aug 16th, 2014
First of all, I want to thank everyone reading my story, there are no words to express my gratitude to all of you. That said, I have been thinking a lot about the state and overall quality of "Fallout Equestria: Conquistators". This story has changed a lot, those who are here ever since I first published know it, most of these changes were made (I hope) to improve it... yet it's not enough. Despite all changes and improvements, I still think it could be better.
After jumping into this project, I became aware of my lack of skills and experience (especially in regards to first person perspective) as a writer and so I'm constantly striving to improve. I like the characters and the story that I have created, but I feel that the execution and the emotions are still... superficial. You deserve better and I know I can do better, and so I decided to take some time to look over all chapters and make the necessary changes to fix this issue. This action can result on either a few changes in the dialogue and description, to a full rewrite. As always, thank you, and I hope I can make something more worthy of your time and attention.
EDIT: mostly done... I think.