I just want some feedback. · 3:04am Aug 8th, 2014
Exactly what the title says, I just want some feedback on how I'm doing on my story.
What I did right, what I did wrong, and what I "dun goofed".
That's it, I just want to improve.
An open-minded half-brony, impressed with what MLP has to offer beyond the shows... and with an... interesting... non-stoped daydream constantly going on in the background...
Exactly what the title says, I just want some feedback on how I'm doing on my story.
What I did right, what I did wrong, and what I "dun goofed".
That's it, I just want to improve.