Updates

I've recently made a series of updates on chapter three that, had I taken some time to review it thoroughly, I could have done in one update much sooner. Due to my trip to Boston, or just school in general, and the sudden growth of the chapter as I wrote it; I rushed myself through my editing process in the wee hours of the morning. From now on, though I do plan to adhere to a personal deadline, I will not sacrifice the quality of the work to do so. I was working against my own perfectionist tendencies when I chose a deadline at all, so I guess I overdid it. All that said, perfection and high quality are not the same thing; so I will keep that in mind when delivering future chapters.
If you are one of the twenty people who have currently viewed chapter three, I ask that you give it another glance. If you do decide to do so, I'm sorry for the incovenience. I really haven't changed much, but I believe those changes make for an overall better story and a slightly different cartharsis; and I wouldn't feel right if I didn't provide the best and truest possible version of my story.