I believe in the supernatural
My mother is a Bitch.
Here is why:
I called my sis an idiot and Mom yells at me, I mention how Mom calls me names and she was screaming.
I tried eating in my Grandma's room because I didn't want to be near Mom, Mo told me to grow up when I said I didn't want to be near her...
My Mother also tells me that I LOOK PREGNANT!!!
WHO THE FUCK DOES THAT TO THEIR OWN DAUGHTER!?!?!?
I fell in love with two guys...
What did I learn from this?
Love sucks.
I lost trust i my friend and my bf knows nothing...
I'm never falling in love again...
I need advice. I was acting all hyper a few moments ago and suddenly I started having really bad back pain. What do I do? Right now I have frozen bacon on my back... 
Hello everyone, I have some terrible news. I have kept you updated aboutmy grandmother. She had cancer, went through treatment.had to go to a nursing home, then was placed in hospice. Last night we came to Ohio to see her.when we arrived and they told her she was here...she died.
Okay so I wrote a new story...The only constructive criticism I got was from SteelxPaladin but the rest was dissing my avatar or telling me I need help if I liked the concept. Okay this was my VERY FIRST story and I don't like when the comments get mean...
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Pro tip: Don't hide behind the "First Story" fact. I did that on my first published fic and had it burnt to the ground by a reviewer. Just sayin'.
2315684 STEEL THIS ISN'T HELPING
Hey it's a good story.
Silver Starlight actually gave a good constructive criticism, though. I know I didn't give the best criticism, but that was because I had to rush out the door.
2315896 If calling it garbage is good criticism then I'm deleting it
2315913 Calling it garbage may have been a bit over the top, yes, but at least he explained WHY he felt that way...
Also, please don't delete criticism, that just looks really, really bad.
2315917 No...I'm just thinking of getting rid of the story altogether...All that did was make me cry and nobody helped. And when she dissed my profile picture...I'm sad
2315932 She didn't dis your profile picture. She said that OC Alicorns don't look very good in the eyes of a reader. She said that about ALL OC Alicorns, not just yours. That's not dissing you or your profile pic.
2315941 She did diss it...
No, she didn't. I think you're really reading too much into what she said.
2315981 She shouldn't have even commented on the profile pic and calling my story or pic garbage was going TOO FAR