New Chapter of TLW and arts. · 12:37pm Jun 19th, 2014
Hey all, I hope you guys enjoy the newest chapter. Here's a question I do want answered, so whoever reads this please post what you think instead of just reading and leaving no comment. Do you think I should tone down how often Storm uses her power? As of right now, there are plans of making it so it takes more of a toll on her physical health, but I just want to make sure it's something you guys want before doing much of anything with that. Anyway, on to the second part of this blog post. I recently commissioned Lost Art from the Gunbucks Tumblr to do cover art for the upcoming Old Grudges reboot. As fimfiction is not letting me add the image to this blog directly, if you want to check it out feel free to click this link. I hope you all enjoy the newest chapter and please please please leave a comment whether or not you think I should tone down the use of Storm's power or not.
i agree with a toll to having the use of her power that is how you started it. it originally sent her unconscious then very weak after.
2221130 *nods* My real question, and I should've worded it like this, is if I should just keep it like that or have it actually start doing physical damage to it because of her constant use of it.
2221148 oh i would say so but start small making every use a sacrafice, just like the wasteland to carve off bit by bit
2221154 Any ideas? So far all I got is coughing up blood and her heart stopping. Obviously the latter is a bit too extreme atm, so I am open to ideas.
2221163 well her power is i type of fire so maybe burns, dry splitting skin, dehydration, severe exhaustion?
this is why i dont write add and ocd xD too many choices and i get stuck rewriting the same line over and over till it is perfect. her heart stopping is a bit much maybe it could be like a final stage if she keeps using them even with the other injuries, and your friend has not written her having powers so maybe in the end instead of dying from over use she loses them?
2221501 Gamma has written her using her powers. There have been a few instances where Percussion Cap sees torched corpses with blue flames dying down.