Revising and editing · 11:21pm Jun 15th, 2014
Recently I had added my story, Hatred of the Anti-Brony, on the submissions list of the Good HiE group. Well to my displeasure/horror I was greeted with an influx of dislikes. Kind of depressing but I'm okay. I was told that my grammar could use some work and that got me to thinking that maybe I should go through and revise my story. Now I won't be changing the actually storyline just rewording it to make it more enjoyable to read. This may sound like what an editor would do and that's because it is. I remember that when I first started this story I was given an offer of an editor but I refused not wanted to waste anyone's time. Since then I've been doing the editing myself but it's obvious that maybe I'm missing something. I know it's late in the game but I think it'll pay off to go through the story once to clear some things up. Anyone is welcome to help me. Just leave a comment on the chapter pointing out faults. Thank you to everyone that liked and favorite Hatred of the Anti-Brony.
You shittin' me?
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You know it. Don't worry I'm still updating it's just i'll also be editing chapters. Everything will still run smoothly.
2209640 Who looked at it?
Be aware that stories of humans hating ponies get knee-jerk reactions of dislikes on this site. Also, people have their own head cannon about how characters act.
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What do you mean? Who looked at the fic or something else.
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That's interesting. How many stories are there of humans hating ponies? I don't imagine very much. As for the characters acting I did go through once and yeah, Twilight to me sounds a bit off at times.
2211504 Twilight is written like she under a lot of stress. This is understandable. Bad shit is happening. Your version hasn't done anything that screams weird. In the show, the writers have her go all over the place episode to episode. I don't see any evidence of you doing that. If you write her acting in a consistence of manner, it should be fine.
Though, take what I saw with a grain of salt along with everyone else. Question the motives.
Edit: I need to be more consistence in my writing and speech.
Dude, this is the best story I have seen on this site yet, and I've been on for 3 years. If you think that there needs editing, then have at. But don't get pushed around by those wimps who think every story should be a bland 'human goes to equestria and they all get along'.