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OldManJebediah


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  • 490 weeks
    To Clear a misconception about Ch:32

    So I've been reading the comments about chapter 32 and I can conclude that their is a misunderstanding about how things went down between Isaiah and Cadance. People believe that Cadance raped Isaiah; while I can see how it looks that way, she actually didn't. I don't know if I wrote it properly (probably didn't, sorry), but Isaiah did sorta gave consent; not verbally but physically. If he really

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  • 491 weeks
    I'm not dead... yet.

    Well guys, I'm not dead yet so that means things are gonna be happening soon. I'm going to keep this blog post short, sweet, and to the point.

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    2 comments · 401 views
  • 497 weeks
    Halfway done with the three chapters.

    Yup! All I have to do is finish up chapter 31 and start on chapter 32! I've been rather occupied with other things and life, thus having less time to work. For chapter 32, I'm gonna try to make it some what shorter than it's chapter 31 and 32 counter parts, mostly because of the lack of content and that I'm getting kinda lazy.

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  • 499 weeks
    Anyone want to proof read chapter 30 for me?

    Yup, the title pretty much tells it all.

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  • 499 weeks
    Just a small hiccup

    I probably should've told y'all this a while ago. My work on the next three chapters has been delayed for a couple of days because of some stuff that has been and will be going in my life. I had to take a couple days off from working on Lonesome because I went on a trip with my family to do some family things, and right as I got back home to work, I got a sinus infection that eliminated the need

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Jun
9th
2014

Summer Plans (Please Read) · 3:42am Jun 9th, 2014

Hey guys/girls/everthinginbetween, OldManJebediah here!

I know that most of y'all are here to read about my summer plans that I have for all. But first I would like to thank y'all for the 300 likes, 350+ favorites, and 31 followers!

Well everyone, I'm kinda excited for what I'm about to tell. I've been having these two great stories floating around in my head for sometime now ever since I talked about it a long time ago. (I can't actually remember if I said it or not but bare with me) I will only be doing one of them. The reason is because that would mean that I would have to write for three stories; I really don't want to do that. I know that I can handle two stories, because I'll make Lonesome my main objective while the other story would be a side project to help get my creative juices flowing if I'm having trouble with Lonesome.

Now, let me give you a little bit of info on the stories...

First one is called "Far From Cydonia".
It's about a EDF soldier who is the combat medic for his squad. Him and his squad (with a few others) are sent to the region of Cydonia of Mars to locate a secretive prototype space vessel that had been stolen by insurrectionists that the EDF are struggling to eradicate. After a series of very unfortunate events, the medic must struggle for his life and freedom on a unknown world. His only hope is the ship's black box, which is the only way his allies can find him.

Far From Cydonia will be roughly around 50,000 words long; nothing too long or too short, perfect for the type of story that I'm aiming at. I already have a beginning, middle, and end planed out for the story. Each chapter will be about 5,000 to 6,000 words long.

Second story is "Road to Revolution".
The human race has had enough of Equestria and its population. The humans look up to their leader whom they call the Everlasting Emperor; who will lead them against their pony aggressors. Throughout the years, the Everlasting Emperor and a few key figures must strategically execute their plan for kindling the flames for the human revolution. It would be long and tedious, but they know that their plan would work. The ponies who think that they are the superior species are unaware of the uprising that would shake Equestria to its core.

Road to Revolution will start with the human race appearing on the coast of the continent that Equestria resides on. As the story progresses, it'll show interesting/ key points to how the revolt starts. One part of the story that I will tell you is that the humans were given the chance to start colonizing the land that they showed up on in the name of the Equestrian Kingdom; and they took that offer, unknowing that it would be a key advantage in the future.

Well, I really hope that y'all like my proposal. I'll leave a comment in the comment section for y'all to vote for what story you'd most likely want to read. Over time, I might give out more information as votes go up.

Feel free to give me advice or suggestions; I'm all ears.

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Comments ( 5 )

Thumbs up for Far From Cydonia

Thumbs down for Road To Revolution

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does road to revolution have a main character or does it just talk about historic battles and diplomacy between the two races

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Road to Revolution's main character is the Emperor. Everything in the beginning will lead up to the rebellion. Think of the events as flashbacks as the emperor is about to initiate the rebellion.

Road to Revolution looks good, I always enjoy a communist or impreal like revolution.

I think option 1 sounds interesting.

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