Story is Up! Also Points system.

After 4 times of failed moderation, and some help from Meeester and Shadowflash, as well as reading the FAQ again (Thoroughly) I have finally gotten my story up. So, yeah. Read it and cringe, I suppose. Constructive criticism is allowed, positive or negative. Don't be a asswad about it though. And the points system that was mentioned in the author notes of chapter 2. Occasionally I will add Easter eggs to chapters at random, and who ever finds it first, second, and third will get points based on when they found it. First person gets 3 points, second gets 2 and third gets 1. I'm not sure what the rewards are going to be, but I'm going to try and keep track of the points in a blog post or note pad. Anyway, that's all. It's up, and I guess I can be proud of it. It's not great.