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XxXImmortalFoXxX


When Fox goes away, Foxy comes out to play.

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  • 175 weeks
    So...

    I don't know. I've been thinking about this story a lot lately. I hate that I abandoned it. I hate that I essentially abandoned the site with no explanation really. Life got really busy, I'm graduating this year, there were some tough times while I was gone where I wasn't in a good head state. But anyways, excuses aside, I'm not satisfied with the story as it stands now. I like the premise of it

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    4 comments · 217 views
  • 220 weeks
    People Keep Asking if I'm Back...

    And I haven't really had an answer. But now, yeah, I'm thinking I'm back!

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    4 comments · 253 views
  • 254 weeks
    Story update thing.

    So, as some of you may or may not know, I've been working on a new chapter, and I'm about 75% through the minimum word count that I set for myself (2000 a chapter.) I'll tell you guys right now, it's not my best work, and there's going to be continuity errors, formatting changes, and various other changes that I can't recall. While I'd love to give you guys a great chapter as an apology for

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    3 comments · 176 views
  • 255 weeks
    Hmm.

    So, after a long, unannounced Hiatus, I'm back. Kind of. As some of you may know, I've been wrestling with depression for several years now and lately it's kind been rough. I'm feeling a bit better. However, I have some bad news. As of the past 5ish months, I've kind of lost touch with MLP and it's fanbase. I haven't watched the show at all and this is the first time I've logged in in several

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    2 comments · 213 views
  • 274 weeks
    Guess who's back, back again...

    Immortal's back, tell a friend. Guess who's back, guess who's back, guess who's back.

    But on a serious note, I'm back from the dead. New chapter of my story is up, so I've got that going again. So Yay.

    3 comments · 205 views
Mar
27th
2017

So... · 9:07pm Mar 27th, 2017

I don't know. I've been thinking about this story a lot lately. I hate that I abandoned it. I hate that I essentially abandoned the site with no explanation really. Life got really busy, I'm graduating this year, there were some tough times while I was gone where I wasn't in a good head state. But anyways, excuses aside, I'm not satisfied with the story as it stands now. I like the premise of it well enough but back when I was first writing it, I was, as seems to be the norm, not in a good head space. I know I've said I'm back like 3 different times, dropped 1 chapter and then disappeared for a year. Actually we're just under 2 months from a year from my last chapter.

Anyways, I'm considering a full rewrite. Does anyone want to see that? Or are you guys satisfied with the way it is and I try and update it more as I get the opportunity to? Let me know what you guys are thinking.

tl;dr I'm a sad person sometimes, considering rewriting A New Star in the Sky. Thoughts?

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Comments ( 4 )

Personally I like it the way it is BUT if your not happy with it then rewrite it either way it will still be a awesome story :)

I'd love a rewrite, maybe it'll inspire you to keep writing for us here more often!

Life happens don't worry about it and so far the book is brilliant do what you think is best but i would love to see it continue

Please do not drown it in 'fluff' but do add some depth. Maybe and in someone else's perspective, do a paragraph of how the main characters existence is affecting a random character. (Example: Big Brass fighting MC over a 'balls' comment, Early Rise reading something a newspaper says MC has done, or One Shielding Light following MC and thinking 'thoughts' about his new charge.) Add in some of the MC's history without bashing our faces in with it, could have got three chapters out of revealing their darkness.

With hope that you continue,
NONEshallTell :moustache:

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