EPILOGUE INCOMING!

I just finsihed writting a short, but hopefully good enough epilogue for "The Mare of Your Dreams". It'll give a happier ending to the story, and I hope you all like it. I just need to get it proofread and stuff, and I'll post it, probably one of these days!

Comments

[aCB]

I liked the ending as it was. The whole story was about how AJ used manipulation to get what she wanted, and how when it comes to love, simply getting what you want sometimes isn't enough. The bittersweet ending really pulled the whole thing together.

Oh well, it's not my story.

[Gutovi]

2127221

Take it as a... chance, epilogue. If you want to keep it as it is, you're not... forced to read it. But many were upset, including me, wiht the sad ending. I mean, I wrote it for a reason. It's not okay to manipulate, so it has its consequences. But still... I'm a romantic at heart, so I gave it a happy ending, that you don't NEED to reed, if you don't wanna

[aCB]

2127794

many were upset... wiht the sad ending.

As I said, it is your story to do with as you please. Art is a fickle mistress, for she imparts different emotions upon each person she sleeps with, even if it is not that which she intended. This work which you have created is yours in its entirety, even if she did leave an imprint upon several men's souls, and I will not judge you for making her what you imagined in your mind's eye. Maybe you didn't intend for this story to impart the depth that I imagined, maybe you did; it matters not. I will read your epilogue either way out of sheer curiosity. I am merely trying to convey to you the impact your story had upon me as it stands; I am hoping that you understand such, am and hoping you will convey to me your opinion.

[Gutovi]

2128302

Yes, Yes. As I said, the ending was intentionally... bitter-sweet, it was meant to be this way. But still... even my own soul asked for a nice ending, so I had to.