Anything you like to see in Chapter Princess Twilight Sparkle? · 5:38am May 19th, 2014
Hello, and welcome to another informative blog revolving around this end and such, but I'm here to ask if anypony has anything that they would like to see in the third chapter, Princess Twilight Sparkle. I only ask because, it may help increase the content of the story, but don't fear I still have great content in this chapter to offer, as Princess Cadence will still experience her new adjustment to the Princess Celestia's conditioning. Now if you want to see Cadence be given a trigger, or something you specifically want to see done, almost anything, feel free to say it. But don't be offended if you don't see your idea, after all not everything can go into a chapter, I'm just trying to collect ideas from what other people would put. So I'm pushing it greatly with awesome hypnosis content that closes this story, and then announce a winner for the contest chapter, which will be fun. Well I eagerly await ideas.
I wanna see Twi mentally regressed to a foal, which Tia would be the mother of, since twi (and most of the fans) see Tia as her second mother. also I'd like to see you show up on Skype sometime before I move buddy!
Not mentally regressed to that of a foal but still rendered more dependent on Celestia's judgement than before along with a few Triggers for happy fun times and one that everyone can use to calm her down from a massive freak out. also I'd love to see some clop but you already told me that wasn't happening in this story.
Anyway as hot as it would be I'd love to see the next big thing and have maybe Twi get stunned by Celestia's plot being shoved in her face then hypnotized while her mind is still stunned by Celestia's previous action.
I loved the induction stuff in the last chapter, but I'd like to see more creative triggers. Maybe see her abusing her control over ponies a bit more (even the brief Luna triggering last chapter was nice)
I think it would be cool if it was during a princess meeting so when Celestia tries to hypnotize Twilight. Princess Luna and Candence come to help twilight but then Celestia uses their triggers it help her get Twilight. Oh and it would be cool if one of the triggers made Twilight think Celestia was her mom and Celestia can change her mind thinks it is at.
i have two ideas that i think would be good
a: celestia uses Luna, cadence and shinning armour to help her hypnotize twilight.
and b: celestria hypnotizes the other 5 elements of harmony to help her/ stop them from being a danger.
it would also be cool if you make celestria use the rainbow, applejack, pinkie, rarity, fluttershy, luna, cadence and shingling armour to hypnotize twilight but that would probably be far to much to write...
As long as you keep it clop-free I'm good
One trigger I'd love to see, mainly on Twilight (though it'd be cool on Cadance and Luna as well), would be Simple Student.
When under the effects of Simple Student, the pony will not be able to recall or figure out the answer to any question, no matter how easy. For example, if Twilight were asked what color the sky was, even if she's looking right at it, her mind just can't seem to bring forth the words. As this is happening, Celestia can supply an answer, any answer, and the pony will accept this as the absolute, undeniable truth. Thus, if Celestia told Twilight that the sky was green, Twilight would believe her completely.
This trigger would be quite versatile for maintaining control over the Princesses.
"Alright, my Simple Student, who is the master of Equestria, and of you?"
"I don't know..."
"Silly Twilight, the answer is that I, Princess Celestia, am."
"Celestia, how could you do something like that to Luna?!"
"My Simple Student, is there something wrong with hypnotizing somepony in order to enforce control over them?"
"I, well, ummm..."
"Of course there isn't, Twilight!"
"Oh, I guess you're right. It is completely acceptable to control somepony like that. How could I have ever doubted you, Princess?"
I think it'd be really useful for Celestia to give this trigger to all three of them. Then, whenever she needs to, she can teach them the proper way of things.
2137817 Not bad at all, I might use that, it's actually a really interesting form of control. Might have to steal that from you.
Anyway thanks for the input really great idea.
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Awesome! I'm excited you liked my idea!
You do such a good job with your story, the hypnosis and inductions are absolutely wonderful. I'm happy to contribute to this wonderful fic in any way I can.
Have fun with your writing!
cadance and luna holding twilight steady while celestia hypnotizes her
spirals, lots of spirals
and I had another idea but it's rather, uh, improper >3>
What about a surprise? Celestia try to hipnotize Twilight, but she detect that, and act as hypnotized so that Celestia down the guard and hypnotize Celestia instead
Another suggestion could be something like "flash" that come from the horn of Celestia as Twilight is forced to watch them by Celestia or by Cadence, Shining and Luna. She try to resist but they force her to look the "flash"