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  • 500 weeks
    Our Lady's Courtship, FiS, and Where We Go From Here

    So... if you've been following my story Friendship is Software, you'll know that I recently ended it around Ch. 6 despite our team's entry to the Vault. I gave my reasons why, but I still hope my readers can understand and accept that it's just not the story for me to be working on right now. Between my enthusiasm for Our Lady's Courtship and my day job as a content writer, I just

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  • 508 weeks
    Ch. 6 of "Friendship is Software" Coming Soon

    I know I had my doubts about being able to continue this story (or at least, by myself), but I finally got a good six pages into the next chapter.

    Take that, Writer's Block! Sustain me with your delicious tears as my Muse and I wreak havoc on the blank page once more!

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  • 513 weeks
    Attn: Fans and Readers of "Friendship is Software"

    I want to start off by saying how awesome it is to have so many people take an interest in my MLP cyberpunk story. It's been fun to write and I really liked building the fictional world of Terra.

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  • 520 weeks
    First Thoughts on "Twilight's Kingdom, Parts I and II"

    So... lots of things to discuss, but rather than do an elaborate summary or play-by-play of 44 minutes worth of TV, I'll go straight to the Good, the Bad, and the Meh.

    Spoilers Below!

    The Good:
    * Discord's whole meeting with the villain Tirek. Well-acted and a rare dialogue between two different villains.

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  • 526 weeks
    An Invitation to the Wedding of Her Royal Highness, Princess Twilight Sparkle

    ...At least, that's what I hope to have completed by Friday. Part II of "This Day is Going to Be Perfect," with wedding plans and last-minute scrambles and love in the air and so many magical, heart-melting moments that you'll simply want to lay down and die.

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May
12th
2014

First Thoughts on "Twilight's Kingdom, Parts I and II" · 4:36am May 12th, 2014

So... lots of things to discuss, but rather than do an elaborate summary or play-by-play of 44 minutes worth of TV, I'll go straight to the Good, the Bad, and the Meh.

Spoilers Below!

The Good:
* Discord's whole meeting with the villain Tirek. Well-acted and a rare dialogue between two different villains.
* Twilight struggling to contain the magic of four alicorn princesses.
* Epic duel between Twilight and Tirek, DBZ style!
* Kind of sad, but it was impressive that we witnessed the loss of the Golden Oaks Library onscreen.
* Cool new crystal tree kingdom in Ponyville!
* All the little touches that show Discord is truly considered part of the Mane Cast's circle of friends.
* Totally unintentional, but TwiShy shipping moment! And same for RariJack and Rainbow Pie!


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The Bad:
* A missed opportunity to see more of what the realm of Tartarus looks like. It's not everyday we see a children's show version of the Underworld, complete with three-headed dog.

The Meh:
* The songs. They're great for the show, but I can live without 'em.
* The cameo of Flash Sentry in the Crystal Empire. Nice continuity for the movie, but what else does he contribute besides being a non-Crystal Pony? I'm just sayin'.

So, long story short, I liked this finale and all the buildup for the climax. It was a great culmination of the season-long arc and had a few nice touches in both its villain and its theme of friendship. Can't wait for Season 5!

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Comments ( 3 )

Don't forget about the Discord and Celestia shipping hint they snuck in at the end there! :rainbowlaugh:

2103571 Of course not! Fluttershy may get to have tea, but only Celestia gets the bouquet of flowers! :trollestia: :heart:

2103606 And the cucumber sandwiches! Discord owes Fluttershy cucumber sandwiches after he dropped them all like that! X3

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