A...Quick Question....

So from the looks of it so far, I see a lot of people enjoy reading my new story "Fool Me Once". I'm really happy with what I see so far even though its a very small start. But with your likes and comments, I feel like I'm getting somewhere when I'm writing the next chapter. That being in mind, there is one thing I gotta ask:

What are your opinions on this story?

I'm really interested to know because I want to be the best writer I can be and your opinions/constructive criticism actually helps me improve. I would love to hear all of your feedback. I hope to hear from you guys about the story. Oh! One more thing!

I also wanna know if I should write a Rarijack story. "Fool Me Once" will be updated weekly but I wanna try a crack writing a romance story. But I do need to ask of all of your opinion. After all, you are not only readers , you are also writers.
Thanks for your time!

-Etch