The next chapter

I'm having really bad writers block about it so I have no idea when it'll come out. I kinda need help with that and fixing the pacing...anyone got any advice about that?

Comments

[fred2266]

Stop the story.

[Hunter reaper]

2032616 saying that to be an ass or actual advice?

[fred2266]

2032631 AZZ.

[Hunter reaper]

2033883 then shut up

[The Mysterious Lombax]

What happened to your story?

[Hunter reaper]

3163031 revoked the submission

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Revoked what submission?

[Hunter reaper]

3163606 for the story to be see by other people to read

[The Mysterious Lombax]

What's a writer's block?

[Hunter reaper]

3165351 The condition of being unable to think of what to write or how to proceed with writing.

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Well, should I give you any ideas?

[Hunter reaper]

3166577 if you want.

[The Mysterious Lombax]

OK. Continue the story this time with a Kirby crossover. When you and Ashley arrive to Ponyville to tell everyone the news, a portal appears and Kirby comes out and it's revealed that he has to protect Toby, too. Also, King Dedede and his minions team up with James and the MLP villains to foalnap Toby and take over Equestria.

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Hello? Did you hear my idea?

[Hunter reaper]

3168965 yeah sorry been busy. Not sure if I'll be able to write Kirby and DeDeDe well

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Well, if you don't know about them, then search Kirby wiki.

[Hunter reaper]

3170093 I do know them(I have and played several Kirby games) but I don't think I'm a good enough writer to write them good enough to where Kirby fans won't be mad

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Can I write it for you?

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Can you continue your story?

[Hunter reaper]

3171185 if you want to

[The Mysterious Lombax]

I need the password in order to submit and read your story.

[Hunter reaper]

3171617 eh you know what. I've completely given up on the story. Sorry bro

[The Mysterious Lombax]

When I continue your story, does it have to be MLP related?

[Hunter reaper]

3174106 I deleted it. Sorry dude.

[The Mysterious Lombax]

No. I meant that when I make a story of my own that continues this one, should I use any of the words I remember from the story before you deleted it and put the Kirby details I mentioned earlier in future chapters?

[Hunter reaper]

3174150 I honestly don't care

[The Mysterious Lombax]

OK. Will you ever make another story of your own ever again?

[Hunter reaper]

3174623 not sure

[The Mysterious Lombax]

What's the password for the story?

[Hunter reaper]

3174845 I deleted it completely from the site

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Can I tell you any ideas for your new story?

[Hunter reaper]

3174975 I have no plans to write a new story

[The Mysterious Lombax]

Does this mean you'll delete your account?

[Hunter reaper]

3177718 no. I'm just gonna read using this account