I doubt many people are gonna read this but here I go anyway. Good season premier. It's funny, introduced some new ponies, didn't throw Spike to the sideline and gave me new ship that I ship very hard in Starlight and Sunburst. Probably my second favorite season premiere after season 2's

I'm considering trying to write another story in the ANH universe where my character from Destiny goes there but I'm not sure if I'm gonna write it since almost no one actually gave reasons as to why my previous story that I wrote was bad other than the not so great pacing

I'm having really bad writers block about it so I have no idea when it'll come out. I kinda need help with that and fixing the pacing...anyone got any advice about that?

I have a guy looking over it now. He can probably help with the problems. Your welcome

I don't really know how to start writing it because I'm not really good at this kind of stuff. The story is going to be about me going to Equestria after dying and getting tasked by Faust and the Devil to protect Toby Mason (APoeticHeart's human OC) with the help of Ashley (Toby's mom) and Squishy (My pet kraken) from a new threat teamed up with an old one. The girls would be helping us of course. The name is gonna be An Angel, A Demon, and A Gentleman. So um...any advice?