Luigi is not dead.

I've not updated in almost a year. This is true, but I have not given up on my story.

I'm going to be honest when I first published it, I didn't plan the story at all, I was just winging it, which caused the prologue to become as cliche as cliche can get. I plan to avoid these mistakes as I go on.

I've been busy this past year with my personal life, but I have been brain storming in my free time and I have a good general idea of what I want to do with this story.

After looking over the unpublished chapter 4, I decided to do some editing of my own and found that I was forcing some comedy, which made it not funny, another mistake I noticed is my pacing I think I went way to fast another mistake I plan to avoid in the future.

Unfortunately updates after I finish proofing and publishing chapter 4, I will continue to be sporadic not 9 plus months mind you but at least 2 week spans.

I would also like to ask if anyone would help me proof read my chapters and maybe give me some pointers before I publish them, I can be contacted on skype (skype name :Aaron Webber) I write my chapters using google docs. My timezone is Eastern Standard Time.

Lastly I would like to apologize for the false promises to update, Life just being a jerk this past year, my schedule will be much better this year, at least I hope. lol