Chapter Revamp · 7:20am Dec 20th, 2011
Hi all.
I just shaved off about 1000 words between the prelude and chapter one.
I'd appreciate if you'd give it a reread and message me with your thoughts.
You've been privy to a rather undeveloped version, one I shouldn't have released to the public, I think.
But it's getting there. And I'd love it if you would help me along the way.