[AToTP] Chapter 4 Complete Rewrite

Loyal readers,

I've completely rewritten chapter 4 (the chapter that introduces Sanguine and Trixie) to be much longer. It includes some new content that will be factored in to future updates to the story, so I would recommend reading it if you're still interested in this story.

On a side note, you all should be aware that a massive overhaul is coming to the story. I'm merging a lot of chapters together and adding several new scenes as well as fleshing out old ones. Once this process has been complete, you'll finally get the ending you've been waiting for. It's mostly complete as-is, but relies significantly on the new content that I have planned.

A Tale of Two Ponies: Chapter 4: It's Not the Destination

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[morrisonmatt32]

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