Chapter 6 discussion.

So yesterday I publish chapter 6 of my story "Brothers", and I want to point two things:
1)I reached 200 views and I feel special :).
2) and two I got 3 down votes on my story, what cause me to question myself if I did something wrong.

So I decided to ask my readers what they think of the story so far, and if there any issues like grammatical errors, plot holes that I didn't notice and so on.

So ask what you want, and I do my best answer them.