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dancing mop


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  • 479 weeks
    Yeah, Hiatus Time. Sorry.

    School is taking up a lot of my time. It is not the only thing doing so. I've gotta be honest with myself, and put my stories on hiatus for a while. Who knows, I might write a little for spring break, or maybe not 'til summer. I don't know yet. Please note that I have taken the time to actually switch them to "On Hiatus", so you can be sure that I will be back.

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  • 483 weeks
    I did it! Woohoo!

    New chapter is up! And just in time; classes start tomorrow morning. It remains to be seen just how much time I will have with schoolwork to do.

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  • 492 weeks
    I Post it, I Post it Not...



    Picking the petals off to randomize the decision...

    I just finished a chapter of GTJD, and...I don't know. I should probably have someone look over it for errors and stuff, but it's been so long, I really want to post an update...


    Fuck it.

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  • 494 weeks
    Get Your Hooves Up! C'mon, it's My Birthday!

    Get your hooves up! C'mon, it's my birthday,
    Shut the hell up, you should care about my party,
    you don't know me, but it is my birthday,
    Get your hooves up, and celebrate my birthday party with me!

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  • 499 weeks
    NaNoWriMo!

    So, it's less than a month until the craziness and epicness that is NaNoWriMo. I'm really pumped for this year, as I only found out about the event on November 1st of last year, far too late to start preparing. I've got a novel idea in my head, and it's been there for close to two years now. I'm really excited to get it written down. As I will be trying to

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Feb
28th
2014

I'm in a pickle · 9:16pm Feb 28th, 2014


I tried to sit down and write Finding Space chapter four today, and I ran into a problem.

You see, the central conflict in the story is going to be about Twilight becoming almost obsessed with her new space program, while Rainbow Dash acts as an ironic, but still believable "grounding" figure, who tries to keep Twilight's rampant obsession in check.

It could have worked. Twilight has been known to go overboard when trying to solve a problem, and Rainbow has recently shown signs of being much more mature than when we first met her. And while she is something of a daredevil, she also deeply cares about her friends' safety, and would surely take steps to ensure that noone gets hurt by Twilight's space program.

Then, Rainbow Falls happened. Suddenly, it was shown that Twilight is far more mature than Rainbow in every way, making the kind of dynamic I had planned seem off, and very forced. I mean, come on, introverted-nerd-who-never-had-any-friends-till-a-few-years-ago Twilight understands interpersonal relationships better than friendly-outgoing-face-of-coolness-who-gets-worshipped-as-a-hero-by-all-the-ponies-in-town-that-totally-love-her Rainbow Dash. If that's the case, then Rainbow clearly has nothing on Twilight in terms of maturity and adultness, and could never be any sort of grounding figure for her. So I'm having trouble writing her that way.

The central conflict of my story has been made false by canon. I don't know how to continue.

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Comments ( 2 )

Don't give a fuck about it. Do the characters your own way.

Please? I want to see the rest of the story. :applecry:

Me too.:applejackunsure:

Alright, I'm gonna give it a try right now!

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