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DaDaDaveed


Brony, vegan, gamer, unintentional hipster. I'm here to read fanfiction, I may take a shot or two at writing, but I am not a writer.

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  • 519 weeks
    Procrastination is my enemy

    Currently having a lot of problems, I'll keep you updated on storywriting. I will try my best to think of something -_-

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  • 527 weeks
    I am currently writing a new story!

    It will be about an OC named Siren Song, a pegasus from (yup, you guessed it) Ponyville.
    it will be moral and friendship-driven as the likes of FiM, perhaps leaving the boundaries the show places.

    I am sorry if you aren't into OC stories and I hope to create more canon-character driven stories after I am done with this current story.

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  • 532 weeks
    To the readers of Speechless,

    I believed that I would really enjoy writing a fic of Button Mash and Sweetie, it didn't turn out the way I wanted.
    In the event of lack of planning, I absentmindedly aimed my story in the direction of a very similar story (not sweetie x button) plot-wise.

    I have made a fruitless attempt to fix it and I am not satisfied with the way it is going. There will be no sequel.

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Feb
19th
2014

To the readers of Speechless, · 2:17am Feb 19th, 2014

I believed that I would really enjoy writing a fic of Button Mash and Sweetie, it didn't turn out the way I wanted.
In the event of lack of planning, I absentmindedly aimed my story in the direction of a very similar story (not sweetie x button) plot-wise.

I have made a fruitless attempt to fix it and I am not satisfied with the way it is going. There will be no sequel.
As far as I see it, Button ends up waiting for Sweetie while in Trottingham, depression coming over him over the course of time he was in the new city. He eventually moves back and happily ever after and yaddayaddayadda...

I'm really sorry, I just can't continue the story, writing is supposed to be something I can enjoy, but trying to fix my idiocy is killing the story for me.

So I will not be doing a sequel to the story. I will however be writing other stories suuch as one about my OC and his friend (not sure how you will feel about that) and perhaps CMC fics, etc.

Until then, sorry.

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Comments ( 7 )

Don't worry! You're completely right: you should write because you enjoy it.
For what it's worth, I enjoyed reading your story, and I look forward to any future ones that you post.

That's alright man ^_^
I can agree writing is something you should enjoy if you do it.
A tip I have for you in your next story is to figure out how you want it to start and how you want it to end. Then work on what happens in between and you can edit that ending as much as you want. Just don't stray to far from your original idea unless you have a big change in mind or just go "THAT WAS A STUPID IDEA!" It helps me somewhat. I'm.... about 10k words in my second story I'm working on and I have big plans. Planning the ending before you get there helps take stress off because then you just fill in how it came to that ending.

NOOOOOOOOOOOO! Now, because you aren't I MUST BEGIN BUTTON BELLE SEQUEL WITH AN ENDING

1854865 I would love to see where you would go with that, actually.
Go for it, buddy.

1855010 I will soon, first though, I have a story about the Ponytones to write :P

1856077 I like the way you think! Carry on, then, friend!!

why you remove the book

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