Mar
24th
2014
I am currently writing a new story! · 8:20pm Mar 24th, 2014
It will be about an OC named Siren Song, a pegasus from (yup, you guessed it) Ponyville.
it will be moral and friendship-driven as the likes of FiM, perhaps leaving the boundaries the show places.
I am sorry if you aren't into OC stories and I hope to create more canon-character driven stories after I am done with this current story.
Again, the story Speechless was horribly written and sloppy, I will strive to make something less atrocious.
Until Chapter 1, everypony, see ya!
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DaDaDaveed · 287 views
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I'm excited :) And what madness is this: "Again, the story Speechless was horribly written and sloppy..."? That story was great! For a first, you avoided a lot of pitfalls that other newbies run into head first, and overall it was very enjoyable. It wasn't a masterpiece, but it was a good read, so don't belittle your work like that. It was marvelous :D
1952244 Sorry, it being my first story, the criticism it received, and the phrase "the artist is his own worst critic" comes to mind xD
1952547 Yeah yeah, I understand. But just don't think that you have to completely overhaul every little detail of that story to make something good because honestly you hit the nail on the head for many different aspects. The pacing just needed to be better, and the story and characters needed more depth. Pacing could have been easily fixed by making it longer, and the story and characters you could have just spent more time brainstorming. So overall the only issue was that you rushed the idea out too soon. If you had spent more time with it it would have been amazing. Even in the end, though, it turned out great and it DOES make me want to read more of your work, so I guess at least it did that :D
1952557 ^-^ thanks, I'll do my best