A Tale of Two Ponies - Initial Upload · 12:23am Dec 18th, 2011
Hello, everypony!
I'm very proud to present my debut fanfiction story: A Tale of Two Ponies.
I've been working on the manuscript since November 1st of this year, and I feel that what can be classified as 'part one' is solid enough for public release.
Please, please, please point out any mistakes I've made. And also feel absolutely free to make any suggestions as you see fit.
Normally, right here, most authors would request that all criticism remain constructive. I'm not going to do that.
If you hate this fic, and you don't know why, just tell me.
If you wish you could tear my intestines out and strange me with them while you pour gasoline over my head and light it with an arc welder, tell me so!
And, if you like it, a compliment would be much appreciated as well.
But even more than that, I just want your opinion.
Where do you think the story is going? Where do you thing it should go? Why? Why not?
Do you like the OC's? No? Why? What can I do to make them come off the page better?
Is everypony in character? Where are they not? What would you expect them to do/say/think instead?
Anything, everything that comes to your mind. Even if it's already been said.
That's all I've got for now; thanks ever so much for your time.
Oh. And happy reading!
You can probably expect updates weekly, if not more frequently. If an update is going to take longer than that, I'll notify everypony ASAP.
Also, I'm not much of an artist. I might throw together a header pic or something like that if this thing manages to get popular, but I'll openly welcome any art that is fitting and has a reasonable level of quality.
