If there's any editor/author out in FiMFiction who is willing to make CPM3 better, I will take CPM3 from cancellation. If someone will help me, you guys will have a good story in front of you. If not, a decent one.
Guys, I'm canceling my new story, due to hate comments and my constructive criticism listening doesn't seem to be working. I give up. I just can't do it. I can't get better, no matter how hard I try. So I just give up.
I give a shoutout to Jake Roberts for his videos. Some of his videos:
Here is my response video:
Jake, you're not the only one who's touched.
I thank you for your support.
Did you guys think I'd REALLY give up? I'm not leaving here! If you don't agree, leave. Don't bother me, don't downgrade me, just LEAVE. If you still bother me, you're getting reported, no questions answered. If I get banned, I'll come back! I'm not gonna let a bunch of little kids who are ungrateful of the updates of my stories bring me down! They try to give me "advice", which isn't advice at
If there's any editor/author out in FiMFiction who is willing to make CPM3 better, I will take CPM3 from cancellation. If someone will help me, you guys will have a good story in front of you. If not, a decent one.
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Humans are difficult to work with within a story...the best thing you could do really is add description
Niieeeeehhhhhhh... I guess I could lend a hand. Which story do you want
murderededited? I can fix spelling, grammar (to a degree), and shitty plot, dialogue, characterization, and description issues.Basically? I can murder your story and help you make a better one! Hurray!
1772325 Yeah, well, "murdering" a story is not how I roll. Sorry!
1772974 Your call!
1772974 Murderers of stories, I think, can be overbearing editors who try to drive their own plot, but the problem is that your plots have been hackneyed and devoid of creative drive even before the almost criminal references to The Outsiders in the third installment, as if the burning school scene in the second wasn't bad enough. You're not into murdering stories that has no life to begin with? You know how you kill zombies in RPGs? With your revival potions! But you insist on beating a dead corpse by claiming that there is no merit behind the criticism that you receive.
If you can't get past this, how can you find a worthwhile editor willing to work with you or improve in your own writing ability?
Hey there, been following this situation for a little while now, and I'm think I'm ready to stake my case. (I think that's the phrase, at least...)
Anyway, I'm glad to see that you're now actively seeking help, which is why I'm here. I can help you with anything you need to improve your story and your writing ability. I dislike seeing newbie writers feeling down over initial failure, it's probably the worst part of the journey. Message me back if you want my help.
And no, I won't try to force my ideas on you or try to pull you away from your series. You love it, so you should write it with a smile on your face. Again, here to help
~ Parallel
1803097 Glad you can help me.
1803457 Great to see that you're willing to seek help.
Anyway, let's get into contact through PMs. Better than cluttering up this page with a completely public conversation.
Make a new story.