The recreation of A Broken Race · 11:10pm Jan 22nd, 2014
So, I have gotten all of the feedback that I wanted when I posted my story. I've gotten many new ideas so that everyone can find the story enjoyable. For the few people that are even going to read this, I'll just explain the changes.
1. The title will change.
2. The story will start at a different time in the plot.
3. There will be much more explanation for it.
4. You won't be bombarded by unnecessary information.
5. There will be a much larger scale for the story, integrating many different plot devices developed for the storyline and history of Equestria. This means... headcanon. There's nothing else to make this work so, yeah... you're going to get some in-depth developments of the story.
6. It's going to be at better quality when it comes to description of scenes and characters.
That's currenlty what the changes should entail, but more than likely, some more changes will be made in the future.
There... and to make this worth it, some epic music to fit the new story.
Can't wait. /)^3^(\
So when can we expect it to come out?
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I would say about two weeks. My semester ends next Friday and at that point I can actually have time to work on it. (The bonus of online classes) I already have plot elements all planned out and great explanations for each critical point from the show, but I might hold off on one of them until the end of the fourth season, those keys and that box could fuck everything up in a heartbeat if I'm not careful.
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I look forward to it.