Revamping! I swear it! · 1:59am Jan 21st, 2014
I am about to finish up the Perky Pink Parfait of Ponyville chapter four here in a while, and I should post it tomorrow. Wow, I've thrown down almost 25k words on that thing in the last week and a half!
After that I am going to switch back to Dashaloo. I should start posting chapters pretty darn quick here because a lot of the work is done, and I just need to do some shuffling between the two stories. Also, I'm going to be doing a lot of cleanup work now that I know better sentence structure, and cut out a bit of the fat here and there.
I will be adding in some minor elements throughout, and hopefully some good suspense bits. I wonder if I can turn an okay story into something awesome...hmm...
Anyway, when this story is finished, and Neko-me has finished the art commission. I will send it to print, and give the book to my daughter for her tenth birthday. EGReece, she's working on her own story, and hopefully we can get it posted here soon. Deadlines approaching! Her birthday is in June and I'm going to need time to order the book, so I gotta get to work fast!
So feel free to send me some hate messages screaming out how much of a lazy bum I've been. Nothin' gets ya goin' like a good kick in the ass! XD
YOU BETTER BE MAN WE'VE MISSED YOU
1748253 Then read Perky Pink Parfait, give me hell for how horrible it is, and I'll switch back faster.
No but seriously, every time I get to writing for Dashaloo, Parfait pops into my head, and I am inundated with a thousand new ideas. I can't write a good Dashaloo if I can't focus on it. In fact, I was sleeping earlier, and I literally woke up, knew exactly where the next two Parfait chapters are going, and I couldn't get back to sleep until I wrote it down.
1749339 Actually, Perky Pink Parfait is pretty good, but Dashaloo just needs some <3 right now.