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  • 259 weeks
    First Big Edit Spree

    So a few chapters are done and edited. To explain some changes, Spike and Nashta are now wingless properly, so a lot has changed in the series of events involving them. Sombra is more of a consistent dick rather than a spastic one with a lot clearer goals and better transitions/interactions. I'd love it if ya'll checked it out.

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  • 260 weeks
    I guess im fixing that old story

    Im alive, question is, was I ever dead in the first place?

    I hear all the problems my writing has. I like to think I've gotten better. So Im taking the stuff there now and revising a lot in as few sessions as possible to keep the mentality I need to have consistent action and motivations. I got super off track with what the story was and want to fix that.

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  • 329 weeks
    So since Fim won't update y'all

    New chapter up. Revision on the old one. Fim doesn't want to spam inboxes since its publish date was back in june...like two years ago. Finally back into it. Who knows where it goes from here, but I feel like there might be a small difference in my writing styles...

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  • 374 weeks
    It's almost Easter

    You all know what that meeeans...

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  • 406 weeks
    Recent chapter

    It sucked. It made me realized I had a huge continuity error and it tore my whole plot apart. Im going to rewrite it and adjust that plot to fit the error so that it wont change the whole story. Im very sorry for being so late admitting this. I was afraid of failing and just ignored it, praying it wouldnt be noticed. Im a bad guy. But I'll be working hard to fix it! Taking the chapter down for

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Jan
10th
2014

An in depth analysis of why Sombra [spoiler] · 12:32pm Jan 10th, 2014

So after reading about the fimfiction editorial and a comment on my most popular story, I thought id try my hand at analyzing my work.


First off, in the show, Sombra was such a vague evil that anyone can make interpretations all day long on how he is as a villain yet the most popular is the mastermind type. I myself actually see him as a genius plotter and insanely sane individual (if that makes sense...). Yet I wanted to see a change, in my own head cannon, sombra became evil, not was evil. That door opened up ideas of reform once again, yet this time he saw the expectations from his son that reminded him of more innocent times. This is when I also made the connection to Discord in the fact that he was stuck in one vessel or plain without any contact to the outside world for a good amount of years; a situation that brings about insanity in everyone. Couple his lust for revenge, second thoughts of his son and fracturing mind....once he was able to see his actions though a mind so innocent and alike, he realized that he was given a second chance and threw it away. So when he came to see his work completed, a ruined castle, scarred son and his unofficial stepdad bleeding out on the ground...it made him realize the level of his own deprivation and insanity. Sombra knew it wasn't his style to gloat but after such a struggle and giving up so much to get his revenge, he couldn't stop himself even if he saw the change. Now the reason he dies was a simple one actually, he just spent a lot of energy kidnapping Dusty and dragging Sentinel for a reason he didn't quiet understand yet to the highest and coldest mountain, came back, enjoyed being dramatic and then ran back to the keep. Being a fragment of what he was in life...there just wasn't enough left to survive if he saved sentinel, thats when he made the choice to make his son happy instead of living with his constant hatred. In summary, trapped with no contact made his mind unstable, his son kept pushing at his heart and making him regret, and just the fact that he ran out of gas for the fire saving a life, rather than ending it.


I hope you enjoyed the story regardless and I thank those who stuck it out to the end with me. Stay brony my friends.

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