Option B for The Legend of Spike OCs. · 9:45pm Jan 3rd, 2014
As I finish ''LoS: Krazoa Island,'' I thought of a different approach for the final entry, ''The Legend of Spike.'' Instead of starring the grandchildren of the Mane Six, I'm thinking of using their children instead as the new Mane Six and heirs of the Elements of Harmony. Take a look at the new character ideas and tell me if you like Option A or B better or maybe a mixture of both.
Here is Option B:
Midnight
Gender: Unicorn
Race: Female
Element: Magic
Color: Blue
Mane: Navy with a pink stripe
Eyes: Yellow
Cutie Mark: Cresent moon with six pointed star
Family: Twilight Sparkle (mother), Flash Sentry (father), Evening Star (brother), Spike (half brother)
Extra: Despite being a princess, she doesn't like all of the attention. She rather spend time with her friends or read a good book. Like her mother, she is top of her class and Celestia's personal student. She has the same color mane, coat, and eyes as her grandfather, Night Light, but the same manestyle as her mother, Twilight Sparkle, complete with the pink stripe.
Sour Apple
Gender: Male
Race: Earth pony
Element: Honesty
Color: Bright green
Mane: Yellow
Eyes: Orange
Cutie Mark: Dark green apple
Family: Applejack (mother), Big Macintosh (uncle), Apple Bloom (aunt)
Extra: He's big, strong, and soft spoken like his uncle. Due to a traumatic experience when he was a colt, he doesn't talk much but when he does, it's usually blunt and direct. Some say he's pessimistic, but he claims he's a realist. Though he's the new Element of Honesty, he represents the harsh truth instead of Applejack's trustworthiness.
Surprise II
Gender: Female
Race: Pegasus
Element: Laughter
Color: Cream
Mane: Gold
Eyes: Purple
Cutie Mark: Balloons
Family: Pinkie Pie (mother), Surprise I ''Granny Pie'' (great-grandmother)
Extra: While not as manic as Pinkie Pie, she is just as carefree and fun loving as her mother. She works in Sugar Cube Corners with her crush, Pound Cake, but she rather spend her time flying or playing games.
Thunderbolt
Gender: Male
Race: Pegasus
Element: Loyalty
Color: Gray
Mane: Blue, electric blue, and white stripes
Eyes: Dark blue
Cutie Mark: Blue and white lightning bolt
Family: Rainbow Dash (mother), Soarin (father), Scootaloo (adoptive sister)
Extra: Coming from a family of Wonderbolts, he trains hard to one day carry on the family legacy. While he isn't lazy like Rainbow Dash, he is very adventurous and can be mischievous.
Posey
Gender: Female
Race: Earth pony
Element: Kindness
Color: Soft yellow
Mane: Light pink
Eyes: Teal
Cutie Mark: Flowers
Family: Fluttershy (mother), Big Macintosh (father), Sour Apple (cousin)
Extra: Like her parents, she is very shy but isn't afraid of everything like Fluttershy was. She's also inherited her animal caring skills and her plant caring skills from them. She resembles her mother so much that she looks like a wingless version of her.
Amethyst
Gender: Female
Race: Kirin
Element: Generosity
Color: White
Mane: Violet
Eyes: Green
Cutie Mark: Heart shaped fire ruby
Family: Rarity (mother), Spike (father), Sweetie Belle (aunt)
Extra: Unlike her aunt, Midnight, Amethyst (whose full name is Amethyst Opal Jade) isn't shy about being a princess, but also manages to remain humble about it. Like her great-aunt Cadance, she uses her postion and influence to selflessly help others.
Evening Star
Gender: Male
Race: Pegasus
Element: N/A
Color: Purple
Mane: Blue
Eyes: Blue
Cutie Mark: Six pointed star on a black shield
Family: Twilight Sparkle (mother), Flash Sentry (father), Spike (half brother), Midnight (sister)
Extra: Both a Prince of Equestria and a Captain of the Royal Guard, Evening Star takes his responsibilities very seriously. His little sister, Midnight, says he's too uptight and over protective.
Apple Seed
Gender: Female
Race: Earth pony
Element: N/A
Color: Light orange
Mane: Brown
Eyes: Green
Cutie Mark: None (yet)
Family: Applejack (mother), Sour Apple (brother)
Extra: Sour Apple's little sister and the leader of the newest generation of Cutie Mark Crusaders. Since she was too young to remember the incident that caused her brother to become... well sour... she remains optimistic and cheerful.
Cherry Pie
Gender: Female
Race: Earth pony
Element: N/A
Color: Pink
Mane: Red
Eyes: Yellow
Cutie Mark: None (yet)
Family: Pinkie Pie (mother), Surprise II (sister)
Extra: Every bit her mother's daughter, Cherry Pie loves to have fun and to bake. She is a CMC along with Apple Seed.
Cider Barrel
Gender: Male
Race: Earth pony
Element: N/A
Color: Tan
Mane: Brown
Eyes: Amber
Cutie Mark: Barrel
Family: Sour Apple (son), Apple Seed (daughter)
Extra: A worker in a brewery in Manehattan, he was introduced to Applejack by his friends, the Oranges.
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Gender: Male
Race: Pegasus
Element: N/A
Color: ???
Mane: ???
Eyes: ???
Cutie Mark: Silver music note
Family: Pinkie Pie (wife), Surprise II (eldest daughter), Cherry Pie (younger daughter)
Extra:
Narcissus of the House of Blueblood
Gender: Male
Race: Unicorn
Element: N/A
Color: White
Mane: Royal blue
Eyes: Baby blue
Cutie Mark: Mirror
Family: Prince Blueblood (father)
Extra: As arrogant and vain as his father, Narcissus looks down upon everypony he mets, even the other members of royalty. He believes that since Twilight Sparkle and Cadance were not born as royals, their descendants are usurpers and not ''true'' royalty.
It's hard to say.
I like the grandchildren one because it will show Spike as a guardian grandfather to the subsequent generations and possibly have more time moving on from the deaths of the Mane 6.
But this one has merits as well to show the happiness of his life with his friends and family.
Maybe you can combine the two where it takes place with the grandchildren and a way older Spike and some chapters are devoted to Spike remembering the times with the Mane 6 and their children and thus imparting knowledge to them that life goes on, and to love every moment they live with their loved ones.
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The thing is, I just don't know if I could go through with it. After everything I've put Spike through, I just don't have heart to do it to him. I want him to finally have a happy ending.
1678896 Such is the curse of immortality, that's the problem with characters like Spike, the best you can hope for is a bittersweet ending. And it wouldn't be too bad in my opinion, he would still have friends and family around and he would definitely keep watch over Twilight's and the other girl's families because they are his own after all.
If you want, maybe that can be the promise he makes to himself, that whatever the future holds he will be there for all the families, but he decides to deal with that when it comes and only focuses on the present since it is the happiest moment for him.
Whatever you decide, we'll still read it and enjoy
Need help with rarity's kid's name? Him if she's a kirin as it's very obvious she needs a Japanese name that fit's gems as that's what brought spike and rarity together. How does amejisuto shirohisui sound it means amethyst white jade.
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Just stay with the translated name of what you have, that would sound like the ideal Sparity daughter name----for one Amethyst and Jade are perfect because they are precious stones....And we all know how much both Spike and Rarity love gems.
1687056 so amejisuto shirohisui I tryed to keep the name to fit the country of origin of the term kirin.
1687056 plus have you ever heard of a white jade just seemed unique like their kid.
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Personally, no. But I bet that a white-colored creature with the name of something like Jade would be a Rarity.
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I'll see myself out...
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No wait, come back here. I still need your input!
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White jade is called nephrite. I think Amejisuto sounds awesome, but I'm looking for a more feminine sounding name. Amejisuta, perhaps?
Right now, Amethyst is sounding like the best option. It isn't too cliche is it? I'm almost tempted to name her Opal because she's purple, green, and white like the precious stone, but I doubt she'll like being named after the cat. Gah! Why must this be so difficult!
As for Applejack's daughter, what sounds better, Apple Seed or Applesauce?
I was a little worried about the horrible pun, I couldn't help myself.....I love puns, even if using them makes the majority of people facehoof....
1687634 apple seed. And thanks for the info. And to
1687704 it okay I had my share of bad jokes from my older brother. But even I laughed at that one. Besides I wrote what I called a double joke. Here it is, knock knock
At this point, Twilight has three children, Applejack, Pinkie, and Rainbow Dash have two, and Rarity and Fluttershy have one. I'm working on husbands for Applejack and Pinkie.
Well here is the rest of the joke just fill in your half in the appropriate places.
Penunt
What did the penunt say tothe cashew?
Let's go nuts.
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Wait a second, that could work! Opal is a precious stone, Rarity's daughter is going to be white with a violet mane and green eyes, and she could name her in memory of her late cat, Opalescence. It could be a running gag that everyone teases her for being named after the cat. What do you think?
1688015 amyphest opal jade... looks like we got the full name opal works as the middle name. The last name was going to be whitejade but auto spelling happened.
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Looks like you didn't need my help. Improvisation is awesome at the right times!!-
That right there is a hell of a brainstorm....and brilliant!!! I love it! And it definitely would be something that Rarity and Spike would name their daughter, plus it descriptively shows readers and viewers the nitty-gritty about all three: Amethyst Opal Jade.
Amethyst--regal, just like her parents, with being royalty like her aunts, godmothers, and other royalty
Opal--In honor of Rarity's faithful pet (maybe we could have a little nod to it, have Ame chasing another cat, and the cat is one of Opal's kittens)
Jade---deep and mysterious like the green that are in her eyes and her dad's scales.
1688301 well I can tell this is going to be awesome wait since the three of us worked together to make the name doesn't this mean we co-own the character. Well I can do the character description and you can do her personality to finish the character diablo can work on her past/talent. I will work on this tomorrow. And sad to say I stink at drawing. So this can work. Diablo you started this character so you own most of her with me and Dan here owning partial of her design.
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sounds good to me
I'll have a bit of her by about mid-afternoon today since it's close to 2 where I am right now. This is gonna be awesome!! And a personal for me: my first collaboration, and with two good guys as well!! Well it's still just for one character, but every journey starts with a single step.
We are gonna make her sing!! And be cute as hell
Maybe even manufacture.......DE MAGICKS!!!!
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I thank you for your input. I already had a plan for Rarity's daughter about her design, talent, cutie mark, race, and personality, just not a name. I've updated the entry about her. I'm still interested in your opinion about everyone else's information. Remember, these are all works in progress and subject to change.
As for Amethyst, her full name is Amethyst Opal Jade. Jade isn't necessarily her ''last'' name. The ponies don't really have surnames, except for the Cakes. Look at Twilight's family, they're not the ''Sparkle Family.'' It's Night Light, Twilight Velvet, Shining Armor, and Twilight Sparkle. Even though the Apple Family is called the ''Apple Family,'' none of them have Apple as a last name. There's Granny Smith, Big Macintosh, Applejack, and Apple Bloom.
1689044 well then I got a earth pony you can use for applejack named geo point. He's a brown furred pony with a gold mane and blue eyes. His mark is a map. He works as a traveler exploring the lands outside of equestria. He met applejack when he stopped by ponyvile on hisway to canterlot to update their world maps. With his job he spends a lot of time away but will try to come back for important events like birthdays and holidays. He always. Has an adventure to tell. His sister is daring do and she helps raise the kids when he's away. He also wants to take a family trip once everyone is gathered to bond with them more.
1689044 that and I got a changeling you can also use to pair up with skyla. His name is flarewing chryailas' son and prince of the changelings. He's not a normal changeling. When he was born a genetic defect appeared that prevented him from feeding off love and gave him the ability to control fire. Now able to feed of fire he is able to regenerate and protect his kingdom. With his defect he has no creators in his body. His pony guise is a black and red pegasus with calm red eyes. His mark is a firestorm. He met skyla when his mother under disguise took him to the crystal empire to learn about ponies. He saved skyla from being kidnapped by what remains of sombra's army and magic forming a new being that can be called sombra's heir named dark soul. Flarewing had revealed himself before skyla in the process and actually declared that he protects his friends no matter what. This had shocked skyla's parents and chrysailas in that his personality was way different to what a changeling was. Chrysailas thinks it was the defect that made it possible as without the need to feed off love he can think more clearly then regular changelings. And thus an odd friendship was born. By this time skyla would be a few years olderthen the next ggen. Flarewing was born around the same time as skyla.
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I actually have a plan for who the villain is going to be. I don't to ruin anything, so I'm playing this one close to the chest.
You gave me the idea of Pinkie's husband being a musician with a silver music note as his cutie mark . I've listed what I got on him so far. He has to be a pegasus because Surprise (and the original Surprise) is a pegasus. I was thinking about Maestro, but that sounds to uptight for Pinkie. How about Happy Tune?
1689326 I was thinking music tone.
I like Option B a lot I do like a good happy ending