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  • 456 weeks
    An Odd Night

    I should be working on my story. And yet, somehow I find myself in a chat-room hypnotising strangers. I'd never done it before, but apparently it went well...

    I need a new hobby.

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  • 457 weeks
    My Sincerest Apoligies + Snippet

    My god time flies by, one second I'm promising that I'll have a story out next week and the next procrastination hits me with all the speed and subtlety of a bullet train on steroids. I really have to apoligise for that. Anyhow, I am now beginning work on the first chapter and to make up for the lateness, I am providing a snippet of the chapter, which you can find below. As for when I'll have it

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  • 469 weeks
    Twilight Corruption Sequel

    Hello, I am proud to announce that I have begun work on the sequel to The Twilight Corruption. It will be called Twilight's Silent Conquest and I have already ironed out a basic plot. You should be expecting the first chapter next week.

    2 comments · 271 views
  • 469 weeks
    Practice and a hint

    Hi, just a quick blog post to say that I'm practicing for a largish project in the future, two hints, it'll contain mind control and is a sequel. As for the practice, it's just a description of a room, but I'll appreciate any feedback.

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  • 473 weeks
    The Penthouse - A short story

    Hi, a quick story written on the Iphone, please, give me feedback in the comments.

    It was a rainy, dull night as Twilight looked over the city, her dark and busy city, stood in front of her window in her luxurious penthouse. A lavish affair of purple leather and lavender walls, it was what you would expect of a business leader such as Twilight.

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Dec
17th
2013

A short story I wrote when bored. · 4:05pm Dec 17th, 2013

Below is a story I wrote when bored but was to short to make a one shot out of. Make of it what you will, but I do have some news about TTC, Mainly that I shall write a new chapter tomorrow.

The classroom was dully lit by flickering ceiling lights as one mare entered, quietly slinking into the room. "Where is he?" This mystery mare spoke in soft tones reminiscent of the songs of old.
Out of her view, a shadow parted to reveal a wane stallion, his coat brown in colour was contrasted by the vivid blue of his eyes. "I'm right here; it's been a while you solar slut," he spoke in a voice which while just as soft as his companions, seemed to be full of a wisdom only guessed at. As he started to talk the mare whirled around her pearl white coat catching on the little light in the room.
"I thought you were dead, after what happened at the start of this nightmare we call this immortality," the white mare almost whispered, eyes darting around the room attempting to find the stallion.
However in attempting to see everything she failed to note the fact that the stallion was hidden under the table he was under. He slowly crept out from underneath as the mare went by and passed him. "You'll be surprised what ponies can survive after they've been betrayed as I have. I would be more angry if I was the only one you did this to, but Sombra and Discord stand in testament to your nature," He spoke in hushed tones as the mare whirled around once again, horn charged with a spell ready to fire.
"I did what I had to, they had Lulu what did you expect me to do?" she yelled as her horn lit up to dangerous levels, given several more seconds it could have destroyed the entire school...
It did not have several more seconds as the stallion charged the mare, whom caught by surprise fired the spell behind the stallion creating a hole in the blackboard, which will no doubt cause confusion for the staff the next day.
The stallion tackled the mare to the floor and starting to punch the mare, making sure to disable her horn and wings, he yelled "There was so much you could have done, you could have used the elements, you could have used the crystal heart, but you used me! You stole my magic and left me a husk of a stallion! I survived though, above all I'm a resourceful pony, so I made a deal with Discord, Immortality for my wings, just do that I could hurt you as you did me," after he said this, he pulled out a large, sharp and carved blade and put it to her horn in large, sawing motions.
After a while of the mare screaming, a patrol of guards burst in. However it was too late.
Time had broken the Sun.

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