Apr
16th
2012
Chapter 5 (YAY!) · 2:25am Apr 16th, 2012
So, as i type this Chapter 5 is 1/2 way to being fully rewritten from the handwritten version to the typed one, which will then be sent off to Howitzer for editing, word count so far is at 2'188 and its still not done being changed to type! I'm hoping that this chapter will be a bigger one for your viewing pleasure :D hopefully you and Rainbow got along well ;) oh ho ho what doth thou thinkest will happen my dear readers? comment below with your guesses :D
I don't care what happens! I'm still sat here waiting for it!
she bashes the shit out of him
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Sean of the Dead style.
72260
are you following me?? how do you know what happens, haha nope like 15% true but not entirely close though 
72259 MCYAV!! YOU MUST STAY AWAKE SO WHAT HAS HAPPENED THE LAST COUPLE OF UPDATES DOESNT HAPPEN AGAIN!! now back to typing
I was planning on staying up as it is already 3:50 am, and I'm playing minecraft with a friend whilst very slowly writing my very first piece
oh wow :@ well i didnt think it would be that late there! it's only like 8 PM here
but wait what you are writing?? 
you must send the story link to me once it is either A 100% done and edited B done with no editing C Done, Edited, and Published. Also if you need writing advice or someone to read it over before publishing send me a message 
You are too kind, Howitzer said pretty much the same, and for what I'm writing, it isn't going to be anything long, I think I'd struggle to hit 2k word count without revising it a few times but I hope it's slightly different from the normal stuff, not enough Big Mac or Caramel in any stories about anything
72312 I had guessed Howitzer would have done as much :) did the same for me, thought id repay the favour on someone else! Different is good though! So you're writing about Big Mac and Caramel then?
Nothing more than friends, I don't think I could pull of any romance, let alone bromance, with a side of AJ to keep it happy.
72320 Get her done!
72322 haha idea! throw them into THE most awkward situation you can think of and write from there
unless your idea is already in production that is! in that case then you can do that one with another idea :D
72329 i'm givin' 'er all she's got captain! sorry couldnt resist
72342 I have a situation down, but that sounds like a good idea for a new one to begin, so I'll steal that and give you all the credit, and two, I found the reply button!
72345 bahahaha FINALLY! and will that idea be in the same story or different? cause i have two super duper doozies of awkwardness for ya, 1 theyre all at a party and BM wants to try for F-shy for once (this would be a drinkin party so teen recommended as rating) and Caramel kinda well..y'know and then they have to talk in the mornin or 2 (WARNING super duper awko taco and REALLY taboo) Big Macwalks into barn, Caramel is kissing AJ, story unfolds from there in the most awkward situation playing out in my head including but not limited to a family discussion with granny smith which AB walks in on
72329 Indeed. Getting her done is an advisable idea.
72312 Not only did I say that, I meant it too. I'm always willing to look over some new pieces of writing.
It's so nice to see other people talking about me, and how I helped them... Warms my nearly non-existent heart...
72363 I'm not sure I could fit them into this particular piece without some serious work on an opening/transition at some point from what I'm aiming for. But who said you can only write one story about those characters, I think I know what I want to write after this one already!
72366 And for that I thank you, when I finish and clean it up some, I'll send you both a copy! 
72370 Excellent. I look forward to reading it.
72370 yes indeed i do agree with Howitzers sentiment on this matter yees yes quite
72373 72371 Thanks guys
72374 No worries. Just focus on getting it written, and the rest will follow.
Back to assassin's creed 2 while I wait.
72374 No problem Mcyav
i look forwards to reading it immensley, now go lock yourself in a dark room with a candle to write with only 1 sandwich to eat. the one sandwich is important as it encourages you to write before your food runs out currently i am onto half a crust and a slice of cheese yay for starvatingness pfft outside interation? who needs thatr!
72386 I don't even...
It's 6:40 and no chapter 5 hmmm? I'm just saying...
72462 Sorry!
this is turning out longer to rewrite cause as i do so i do small edits to errors i find almost done!
Haha, it's ok, I can wait a little longer
72481 writing the last page out now
but now we have to hope Howitzer is up, OR we can put up my slightly edited version then have H edit one and we put that one up after i get it :/
Well, it is your story, I can manage either way. I'll let you decide on what to do
72485 Hmmmm i shall decide in a tad it depends whether or not H has succumbed to sleep yet, if so then the chapter will be up tomorrow should the editing be done by then, if not then tonight i hope
I hope he hasn't, it's been a long night waiting, but it wouldn't surprise me knowing the luck I get on here!
>> Fine then Mcyav i shall reward thee, give thy a sec
You're in Luna speak again...
72504 psh i love luna speak, my pony name does relate to stars anyways Caelum Starshine LOL now message me back, you have one which requires your attention
Pshh If you checked you shall see I did, oh Caelum starshine! I can't write in Luna speak. Old equestrian confuddles me
72510 haha oh well i guess its an acquired skill
also
72385>>72260>>72376 Chapter 5 is now written and sent to editing expect update soon, was hoping for tonight but my slight compulsions to edit it while re-typing was too much and i did mini edits while typing so it took A LOT longer to do than expected
my apologies but hope for a good 'un tomorrow
72516 Cool, can't wait!
72518 haha well i can't wait for your feedback on it :D
Hm...
CRUSH. KILL. DESTROY.
#SWAG
72587 I JUST WATCHED THAT TODAY
72629
Hey, how's about a wanna have a pizza pie?