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Raging Mouse


Small. Fuzzy. Irate.

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  • 535 weeks
    [SPOILER] An image of Twilight in her natural state.

    Hello!

    Have a look at this!

    Yep, this is a thing that has been made. It was for a good cause; the Combined Community Charity Challenge is what motivated this.

    Head on over to Obvious Decoy's DA page and take a look at all the other cool drawings there!

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  • 552 weeks
    A call for a proofreader!

    Hello followers!

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  • 576 weeks
    Something Trixie this way comes...

    I'm in the process of submitting my second story. It has Trixie in it!

    It is also unrelated in any way to my first story, though there are some similar concepts. I just thought I'd make that clear.

    Happy reading!

    2 comments · 342 views
  • 584 weeks
    On the season finale.

    I call bull on Starswirl's incomplete masterpiece. If it's incomplete, why does Celestia call it a masterpiece to begin with?

    Because it's meant to be. The entire point of the spell is that the incomplete half, together with a personalized other half, creates a personal alicorn transformation spell.

    Celestia sent the spellbook to Twilight knowing exactly what would happen.

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  • 587 weeks
    There's something that has recently come up in the show...

    ...and I just can't wrap my head around it. It's driving me to distraction.

    I'm talking about the fact that the Crystal Empire is so close to Ponyville that the train ride there and back takes less than an afternoon. It's two completely separate biomes, fer Celestia's sake! They'd be thousands of kilometers apart on an Earth-scale and type planet.

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Oct
2nd
2013

A call for a proofreader! · 12:46pm Oct 2nd, 2013

Hello followers!

I am in need of a strict proofreader; someone who'd hunt down and mercilessly point out all the remaining grammar and spelling mistakes in my works. I've tried repeatedly to find one but have nothing to show for my efforts, so now I turn to you. Do you know a grammar fascist with a keen eye? Someone who wouldn't mind hunting down punctuation errors? Please, ask them to contact me. I'd appreciate it.

Thank you for your time.

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Comments ( 4 )

I guess you could try asking Sessalisk--I'm not sure how interested she'd be. (I'd volunteer myself, but I'm not very good at remembering the rules about commas. I can spot most of your other errors, if that's good enough.)

I don't know anyone who'd do it besides me, but then there's that Halloween writing contest. I suppose I have no one to recommend at this time.

Skeeter the Lurker and Merc the Jerk are usually available/helpful.

I might be willing, though I have trouble keeping commitments, and would only be good as a temporary proof-reader. Moreover, I'm still new to FiMFiction and have not seen many episodes of the show, so I cannot be counted upon for canon compliance. If you're interested, feel free to ask.
Great work on the Ash, by the way.

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