So yeah

things have been going ok lately. got into college, navy's actually looking ok though my running needs alot of work for entry. college is pretty cool. made more friends in less than a week compared to 5 years in secondary school. (if you're British you'll understand the schooling system)

My stories. well my 2 originals are still on hiatus. not sure for long but note that they 'aren't' cancelled. it just i've lost current motivation on them. and the re-writes

My latest one however. may just be my best story yet, 'trade mistakes' got more like and favs in a matter of weeks compared to the year odd with the other 2. (probably from the shipping i suppose)

i have a new co-author/editor to help me with that and for him im grateful and you know who you are ;).

but i just wanna ask. what do you like about this story so far? what do you think my actual writing is like? is there any sort of input/ criticism you would like to add? maybe tell me the things that could do with correcting or you just dislike since i have around 8 dislikes but yet still no answer as to why?

i want to make this story good. so it helps me with my writing skills and to get the motivation to do my others as well.

please make yourself heard, this kinda means a great deal to me for i don't want to just simply give up on everything.

Alonelypegasus

Comments

[Still Shadows]

Well I almost have the first chapter done and Matrix is Major 'Matrix' of the Royal Razgriez Demons (RRD) of the Yuketobonian Air Force (YAF). I actually forgot that I was writing a story for almost a year and actually started today.

[Gaz1997]

1356490 lol you

[Still Shadows]

1356521 Well I was busy and since I was promoted to Lieutenant Colonel last week I asked to take a two week leave to be with my wife and today she asked why haven't I started the story on FimFiction and I nearly wanted to go to a pet shelter and ask if they would let me pet a rabid dog until it rips my throat out... Too much?

[Gaz1997]

1356640..................................................

[Still Shadows]

1356645 But I've been through much worse... Sorry.

[Gaz1997]

1356653 havent we all?

[Still Shadows]

1356666 I guess you are correct. But I've seen what happens to a captured U.S. Coalition soldier.

[Gaz1997]

1360815 shudders. dont tell me then

[Still Shadows]

1360843 I won't.