The Revenge of the Sombranian Cult (TROTSC) Revised! ...partly

Hey everyone, just wanted to let ya'll know that the prologue and the first two chapters have been fully revised!

What I did was fix a lot of awkward things, such as grammar and stupid details. I also added more of an explanation as to why Rainbow feels the way she does about Twilight!! I also added some other nice tidbits of information that contributes to the story, but I'll leave that for ya'll to find! XP

So the plan is for me to revise the next two chapters tomorrow morning, and then either work on the next chapter of this story or There is a First Time for Everything.