Cry Havoc and Let Slip the Dogs of War!

Yeah, I went there.

So, once upon a time I proclaimed world building to be the most exhilarating writing I could create. Now, I'm not so sure. Taking my first shot at serious battle scene, and this is pretty damn awesome too. The only problem is there's a fine line between intense and cheesy. I guess there's only one way to find out, which will be to post the next chapter of Kinetics. I'm thinking Friday.