Update: Chapter 6

Yesterday, the fourth of June, following the brilliant critiques of one Luminous Lead, I spent much of the day editing chapter six, Justice. As of now, chapter six has an entirely brand new ending with some three thousand more words than it had before. If you don't read it, you won't be lost, but it does change the relationship between Jericho, Cards, and Dust from one of the two girls following him into one where they are all confederates of necessity, each with the same goal but radically different reasons for wanting that goal. It begins right after he frees himself from being lynched. In short, Jericho doesn't trust them, and so to the girls is further than ever an outsider; chapter seven has been edited to reflect this change, too. Trust me, this new ending is 101% improved.
So, if you're looking for a mini-dosage of new Jericho while you wait for the weekend, have at it.

Comments

[Derpmind]

Just so you know, most of your readers won't ever see this blogpost. If you want to inform everyone, you're going to have to put a note in your next chapter update.

[Crushric]

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Actually, in the blog post options, there's an option to "tag" it for a certain story. Thus, all people favorating a story will be informed, which I toggled on for this post. But thank!

[Derpmind]

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I forgot about that. I usually follow authors of the stories I'm reading. Anyways, you're welcom!

[MessoriaAQ]

, and that idea could go fornicate itself by repeatedly opening and closing a spiky umbrella in the anus—and do so while I inappropriately yodeled off in the background.

Did that include her socks?

Why can't I stop laughing? Seriously, the talk with Cards was dead serious, and all Jericho's concerned about are those socks? His brain is so screwed.

Constructive criticism.
You write extremely fast, good sir.
Really, this story = instant win. Das ist einfach FAKT!!!

Noticed minor typos:

“And so we’ve gotta do it ourselves.” Dust sighed long and hard She looked at her hooves, at Cards, at the sky, at the forest, at Cards again, and then just finally at the ground.

A random capital as far as I know.

his purpose about as far away from ‘hugs and kisses’ as a bottle of scorpions taken analy was from being a good idea.”

You forgot one L in anally.

[Crushric]

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Ah, errors fix'd. Thanks.

And yes, I can be very fast when I set my mind to. To be honest, it was still slower than me at full power and motivation. Glad you're still likin' Jericho. Now then, back to Jericho cursing in New York Italian at Equestrian mares...