A good start! · 5:40pm Mar 26th, 2012
Well, this is good news!
First, Thank you so much everypony! I appreciate all the praise and criticism you guys are providing, so that I can continue to improve my story!
Now, to address some complaints, questions, and other things I want to mention.
Another Fallout Equestria Spinoff?
Yes, another spinoff, I'm sorry if that doesn't appeal to you.
But in all seriousness, I chose Fallout Equestria as a template because my whole inspiration to start writing this came from Kkat and Somber, it's such a rich and well developed version of Equestria that's different from the normal rhythm of things.
Another 'OC lost memory and quests to find it' story? Again?
Yes, I know it's a rather cliche scenario, but I like to believe that I'm going somewhere very unique with this story (No spoilers) and the Amnesia presents a good platform to work off of.
Grammar and Spelling is a bit off in places, you might want to get a proofreader.
What a fantastic idea! I wrote the prologue and first chapter in a slight bit of a rush, and missed quite a bit while I was doing quick editing before uploading it. I would love and welcome anyone to step forward with the offer to proofread, just send me a message with your... erm... credentials? (Not trying to be picky or anything, but I want proofreaders who don't miss my mistakes)
About the length...
Yes, I understand that 2000 words for a chapter is rather pitiful as far as Fallout Equestria goes, but as I mentioned before, I just wanted to get something out there. I promise that I will try to have nice, lengthy chapters to follow up these, and will probably come back to redo the first bit.
Once again, thank you so much everypony! I hope you continue to read my story, and give me advice and criticism.
I hear you on all that that's why I also did a FoE spinoff despite the negative responses they get