And so is the story!
Chapter in yo' face!
Sadly, unable to find the inspiration to write an original story, Scyto has moved on to the next best thing: Trying his talent at Fanfiction!
Herp Derp. After rewriting about half of chapter-one, I realised: That was terrible!
Sticking to first person, expect some chapter 3 by Sunday evening.
But, on the bright side, I rewrote the prologue to -much- better standards.
Unfortunately not perfect with the canon of the first chapter.
So, *sigh* I'm going to re-re-write it, this time again in third person, and try to produce something or actually good quality.
HerpaderpI'manidiot.
Yeah. Okay. I really hate writing in first person. Like, alot.
I started writing the story in first because that is a sort of... generally used style for Fallout Equestria, but I feel I would be able to write a much more engaging and interesting story if I switched to third-person.
So, what do you guys think? Switch to third-person and quickly redo the first two chapters (So I can also fix them up as they're not perfect) or continue pushing in first-person and put out chapter 3?
... But not nearly as long as I'd like each chapter to be. I want to be able to release chapters on a bi-weekly schedule, but to do so I have to cut the length of chapters to about five-thousand words per. I can't have it both ways.
In other news; I really hope you all enjoy chapter 2! I feel like it's quite the step-up from the prologue and first chapter, and I really hope my skill will continue to improve the farther into the story we go.
Well, this is good news!
First, Thank you so much everypony! I appreciate all the praise and criticism you guys are providing, so that I can continue to improve my story!
Now, to address some complaints, questions, and other things I want to mention.
Another Fallout Equestria Spinoff?
Yes, another spinoff, I'm sorry if that doesn't appeal to you.