EQD Rejection

Sooo, I failed to get BQ,RK on EQD.
According to them:

Thanks for submitting to Equestria Daily. Unfortunately, your story did not pass initial grammar inspections due a number of issues with grammar, punctuation, and particularly sentence fragments that all need to be rectified and, as a result, cannot be sent to the pre-readers. This does not count as a strike, but your story will continue being rejected until it can be brought up to a standard that we can forward this story to the pre-readers. Feel free to e-mail us back if you have questions.

Oh well...