I'm back! Sort of. I've been working on a lot of different projects that I'd hope to upload someday, but unfortunately for me, work, hobbies, relationships and a number of other things seemed to get in the way quite considerably. One of the biggest problems I have had is focusing on a project with little support, and little exposure. Once I get feedback, I really start to get the ball rolling;
So, as you've... probably known for an agonizing long while... I've been working on a new story, set in a future Equestria with steampunk-age technology. I would really appreciate some pre-readers for opinions on the prologue, and possibly an editor, but that's not totally necessary, as I'm comfortable reading some stuff again and fixing it myself.
Do you know what it feels like to be alone... to feel empty... to just never want to wake up again... to just find someone, know matter who, and hold them tight and just cry?
Hey guys, you know how I was thinking about getting some help on my stories and things? WELL, NOW I NEED IT! :3
I'm looking for proofreaders, pre-readers, and people willing to give constructive criticism so when I release my new story it's as refined as possible. I would very much appreciate any help you guys would be willing to give.
(Okay guys, I've finished the VERY LONG description of the story, and I want to see if you think it's well written and entertaining. I also want to tip you guys off about what's actually going on in the story so you have an easier time making and perfecting your OCs. Without further ado, here's the FRICKING DESCRIPTION.)
They are all part of a Matrix?
37225 There is no spoon.
No. They're just a lot deeper than what's been said so far.
WE SPILLED EVERYTHING TO EACH OTHER. EVERYTHING.
37310 The cake is a lie an the Discord from both fics is the same person?
37318 Whole lot more fucking MINDBLOWING than that. Like... BY A HUNDRED TIMES.
37392 It is all a dream, and Dylan is actually stuck in an Insane Asylum after killing his father?
37402 That's predictable and overused. Also, he's never watched the show. (Creates too many weird things in HiE stories.)
I ain't telling you what happens.
37438 Your actually Gylden, and He is actually Chuckles, and ya'll are writing the others story....?
37440 HOLY FUCK NO. Rainbow is mah best girl, and she kicks ass. I couldn't write clop about her. Besides, I'm into Fluttershy, dont'cha know?
37449 So you the evil twin of Gylden, who wrote his story yet this story at the same time? That then exploded twice?
37454 Nnnnnnnnn- SCARY BUTT FUN.
37566 I never knew Gylden was in to that......
37568 I'm not.
But my clone here is.
This is my clone.
I SHOOT HIM WITH MUFFINS WHEN I GET ANGRY .
37568 I never knew you were into sticking your reproductive organ into other creatures' mouths and laying eggs in them.
37916 Wait. Rolg Nedlyg! ROLG NEDLYG! RUN FOR YOUR FUCKING LIVES!
Wait... I got this.
CHUCKLEDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHMAIGAWDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOTHEPOWAHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOINMAHPANTSOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPLEASESTOPMEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOKEN!
38086 Hey don't knock it till you try it.