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Moon_Fire


Writer and idea-maker. I'm also a gamer (Nightfire170295 if you want to add me on Xbox).

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    Halloween Special

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    DJ and I have
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Mar
17th
2012

sneak peek · 12:36am Mar 17th, 2012

I have decided (without Blazer knowing) that I would give you a sneak peek at the fourth chapter of The CMC Defense of Equestria


Here it is:

Down in the kitchen, Herbtail had run into the table and was rubbing her chest when she heard three voices coming from the stairs.

“Are you sure that you heard something, Applebloom?” said a young voice.

“Ah know Ah heard somethin’ down here,” another voice said.

“I heard something as well, right after we woke up, Sweetie Belle,” a third voice said as the three fillies walked around the corner. They noticed Herbtail right away.

“I presume that you three are the Keyblade wielders that I’ve been sent to kill?” Herbtail asked.

The three fillies responded by summoning their Keyblades.

“I take that as a yes.”

…........................................................................................................................................................

“Why don’t we take this outside then,” the mysterious unicorn asked them while turning around.

As soon as she was out the door Scootaloo asked, “Who was that?”

“I think we should go ask her,” Sweetie Belle said.

“Didn’t you hear her? She said she was sent here to kill us!” Applebloom said.

“Yeah, and that pony in the dream said that if we don’t do anything everypony would die.”

“I’m waitiii~ing,” the unicorn said in a singsong voice.

“Fine, we’ll try ta talk ta her,” Applebloom said.

Once outside, Scootaloo asked, “Who are you?”

“I am Herbtail, Mistress of the Roses and Herald of your doom!” the unicorn said with a haughty smile. “Have at thee!” she shouted as Shadows came into existence.

“Looks like it’s time to take out the trash, girls!” Sweetie Belle said while jumping at the nearest Shadow.

“Hey, I was about to say that!” Scootaloo said as she sliced one in half.

They finished off the last Shadow after two minutes of intense fighting.

“Looks like I’ll have to test you myself,” Herbtail said as she summoned her scythe. It was a scythe that had a sword where most of the handle was supposed to be. It had a rose surrounded by black on the flat of the blade and the edge was blood red.

“Come at us, sister!” the fillies said together.



Hope you liked this! Because I'm probably not going to do this again.:trollestia:

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Comments ( 2 )

Nice move there our readers might be getting impatient so, thanks for doing this :yay:

33773 and here I thought that you would be mad:applejackunsure:

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