Things to come on Amnesia. · 9:21am Jan 13th, 2013
I am glad that I have a few people interested in my story, and guess what?! I got my first supportive comment! YES!!! I thought first person was hated but it turns out its Really hard for some people which is why people don't write it, For me First person is easier cause you can add in things the character is thinking. Also I have done third person before in a story I wrote called The Silence, It started out good and then bombed near the end and got rushed cause I was so sick of it and wanted to make my other story I write that is not related to MLP or this site. Heres the only things I can tell you on what I am planning:
1: OC and Rainbow Dash Romance.
2: The Shadow guy is not a changeling.
Thats it.
If you have any suggestions for my story or would like to add a character I'll let you throw one in as long as its a pony, No humans in this story sorry. If you have a Suggestion on how the OC Razor can get into a relationship with Rainbow Dash it would be well appreciated cause I literally have ZERO idea, Idea's go back and forth and then I kick myself in the head over how it wouldn't flow easily with Rainbows Character. For someone who writes a lot of Rainbow Dash stuff if you got a suggestion post a comment or send me a message I would very much appreciate it because I need to get to that point sooner or later and I'd rather have an idea down before I get there.
(Thank you to Stormcloud for being the first to give a supportive comment, You get a cupcake).
-Rezz.
(noms cupcake) lets see(opinion) i think it would be cool if it was really slow and only at the end is there like really romancey stuff..like a climax. also that way you don't run out of conflict(in the form of an affair) halfway through the story. (movies often do this)
rainbow dash is the second main character in my story, i found that a motherly/sisterly/friendzoned relationship flows best.
from what i see in the show rainbows character is a bit slow on the uptake, but doesn't find it hard to start caring for others even if she doesn't really know them. she also seems to be a willing emotional care taker (like with scootaloo, fluttershy and the rest of the main six.) she is also super tolerant of misdeeds by her friends. being outright attacked by fluttershy and having her friends plan a plot to ruin her self esteem. as well as being made fun of.
this is only with other mares and she gets EXTREMELY sensitive around colts and is more than willing to fight them if they get on her nerves.
this is my take, i hope it helps
707619 Thank you.