Taking Your Suggestions! Plus Update · 3:33am Jan 13th, 2013
So, first off, the next chapter of Becoming One With The Night should be going up sometime tomorrow afternoon, I hope. The chapters are going to be split up, one per day of the visit, so as to not take away any emphasis from the events that transpire.
Now, I've got all the major plot points for the story set in stone (mostly). However, I am open to ideas concerning the rest of the Main Six, so as to ensure they get some screen-time of their own. To that end, I am looking for scenarios, situations, etc that you all might want to see.
Additionally, thanks for the good reception of my first sex scene/story, it seems to have been received rather favorably. I will be doing more scenes in the future in spots where they can naturally fit into the story.
Till next time, as always, thanks for the comments, thumbs ups, feedback, etc that you all have given! I also ask that, if you believe the story is worth it, that you offer up a thumb (up or down, however I would prefer the up. xD Shameless self plugging, I know!). Thanks again for reading my works, and see you [hopefully] with a new chapter tomorrow!
Yay for new chapters!
I would give you a like on the story but the website won't let me
hmmmm, well I'm not generally knowleagable about situations that other pairings (not Twiluna) get into, I supposed you could throw down, small "how they got together" moments. or small problems that arise from their relationships and how they work them out, maybe mentioning it to Twilight in the main story every so often.
Maybe something about Rarity and Applejack trying to set a date up and their respective jobs keep getting in the way. Maybe Applejack decides to be spontaneous and surprises Rarity in Canterlot for a day.
Maybe Pinkie baking Fluttershy a cake to ask her out or something. This pairing is one I haven't really seen a lot, so it'd def be interesting to see situations that it'd get in. like Pinkie maybe has Fluttershy's animals help her bake a cake.
hmmmm If you've read the Winningverse main story you could maybe make Rainbow Dash a player Cloudkicker style. ie, she enjoys sex. a lot. BAsically maybe a look into Rainbow's current love life or somesuch.
Maybe deconstruct Twilight's Twidash relationship a bit. show how it didn't work out, maybe Luna's a bit curious or insecure to see if she measures up.
This is all stuff off the top of my head for the moment, maybe something will come to me later
Edit: I say maybe way too much in this comment.
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It's being editing now, the length is approx 3,300 words this time around.
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Silly website, not letting you interact with things I suppose.
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Thanks Poco, I'll mess with some of these ideas when my writing slows down next and see about stuff. Only thing I want to avoid is making Dash that sex crazed stereotype. To me it just clashes with how I view her. And no, say as much as you want, it's useful stuff.
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I will totally say as much as I want, but I probably should have been slightly clearer. I used the word maybe in every sentence except two in that comment. I used the word maybe WAY too much.
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Oh, yeah. I totally just glanced and thought you said you said too much. Caffeine must be wearing off, time for another pot o coffee I suppose...
Editing is a pain in the ass by the way. Was fun sitting down, thinking I had maybe 500 words left to write, and instead I crank out 1250.
708413 Oh I don't know. I just followed you for the hell of it. I haven't read any of your stories. But I probably should shouldn't I?