Cousin Vinyl: Help me with it

Hey guys, As alot of you know I'm not good at Punctuation, Spelling, and Pacing when it comes to my story, You guys are great for enjoying the story but now I need your help to make it better, I need more than just one editor, I need some People who are willing to critique and willing to yell at me and point out my mistakes, I need people who are willing to add their own flair to the story and are willing to take out parts that they deem unnecessary. And lastly I need people who are willing to do the job. So if you guys want to help drop me a line via the Fimfiction messager. Because I need your help to make Cousin Vinyl the best story it can be.